Dark Ages

She thinks in exotic colours 
that drip off her tongue 
like sharp shining jewels
formed somewhere deep 
in the permafrost of her,
the grey matter thrives
in the lava somewhere
rising inside the 
lux velvet crimson 
pulsing at the core of her, 
and births diamonds 
that drip off her tongue 
like icicles 
that could pierce and shatter
a heart or could melt them 
just the same

He is like a rhesus monkey
quite short in mind,
small in sound, oh, 
but never sound,
the expression on his face,
wanting, eternally perplexed,
the value of his thoughts jumbled, 
his darting hirsute mind 
running zealous riots around 
invisible conquests in 
neverending schizoid circles, 
rattling the bars of his cage 
just for attention,
his words form strangely
for a species trapped 
in his own dark age,
each day hardly speaking
but his mind screaming,
passing his hand through 
his thinning hair 
he is time poor
holding a cup 
out for love
to the monkey grinder

all seems lost in poetic translation
yet, it ferments in the daily conditioning,
the small ritualistic routines
regularly delivered in bed before sleep
and upon waking 

for one cannot survive without the other;
it’s in the feeding, not in the taking





Candide Diderot. ‘24 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 2/2/2024 6:09:00 PM
Hello Candide, What a mesmerizing journey through contrasts and complexities. Your imagery and metaphors create inner worlds and external perceptions. It's like diving into a complex maze of thoughts and emotions. It is truly captivating! - Daniel
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Date: 2/3/2024 2:58:00 PM
Thank you. Most will debate that.
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