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Image result for pictures of white crepe myrtle during a summer storm

dark ominous clouds brisk, breeze whips crepe myrtles.... white dots the green lawn

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/11/2021 10:19:00 AM

I see that you fully understand crepe myrtles; nice one.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/12/2021 1:38:00 PM

I like the imagery of the white dots peeking through the dark, gjves a feeling of hope~

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/12/2021 3:58:00 PM

Michelle, I am glad that you got a feeling of hope from my work. The white dots were Crepe Myrtle's blooms falling on the lawn from the wind and rain. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/8/2021 11:19:00 PM

So descriptive. You did well Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/9/2021 6:45:00 AM

Victor, Thank you. SK

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/8/2021 1:57:00 PM

Sara, I agree with Alexis, your lovely haiku paints a vivid picture! Blessings, Kim M

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/8/2021 2:25:00 PM

Kim, Thanks so much. Your visit enlivens me. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/8/2021 1:13:00 PM

Hi Sara, Your haiku paints such a vivid picture. Well done. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/8/2021 1:15:00 PM

Alexis, I am glad that you could see the picture from my words. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 7/8/2021 1:00:00 PM

the winds certain do shower our gardens with natural confetti! hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/8/2021 1:05:00 PM

Jan, I see you have experienced the sight. In summer, I saw white specks flying around with the breeze then I saw white all under the Crepe Myrtles. Thanks for dropping by. Sara