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Dare To Care

It’s not frost you see, its fear. The hollow spot left behind closed as memories became sweeter softening the hardness that once controlled. Its frozen parts thawed gently over the years. Sorrow gives way to sheer weariness. Happiness evades to dark corners to simmer on a low heat allowing its steam to rise occasionally as hope remains a constant flame burning in the dreariness. Joy seems to have taken a holiday. Intermittent moments, when it resurfaces, bringing short bursts of laughter along with smiles that last until the occasion has spent its time and had its say. Love remains supreme, even incomplete. Ingrained as it is in the soul that lives to give without thought of receiving back, often betrayed or simply passed over, it continues to go forward refusing to admit defeat. A heart filled with love wants to share. Mended, hidden for a short season, its beacon is always there waiting for the chance to give of itself should someone take a chance, see past fear and dare to care.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/11/2013 8:46:00 PM
Debra :-) Congratulations with having your poem Featured this week. Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda"
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Date: 5/30/2012 12:27:00 PM
I have not been on the soup for almost a week to read and comment. I have enjoyed being able to read your poetry today. I wanted to stop by to thank you for the comments you made during my absence from the soup. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment Debra. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2012 9:10:00 AM
its never too late for love my dear sweet Debra..i know u since lilu days...u have a heart to die for...may all ur dreams come true...ur poetry has pasion and they often breaks into my lonely mind and i feel some hope ....cheers !
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Date: 1/7/2012 2:44:00 AM
This is so nice, lady! It's easy to see you take great care in how you write your poems!
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Date: 4/26/2011 8:39:00 PM
This poem is deeply sad Debra, but i love it very much because it is extremely well crafted
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Date: 4/25/2011 1:00:00 PM
A sad, but tender write. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 4/25/2011 10:44:00 AM
Powerfully moving Debra. Great poem. I am sorry you have received some of the pain I've given to others out of my own fear or newborn love rising out of old embers that had grown cold. I assure you it wasn't given for free without a huge cost to me as well because I've suffered my inability to open my heart too or keep it from closing. I think we can only give, without hope of getting resonance back it return, and cherish those splendid moments when we magically and unexpectedly do.
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