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For Tania Kitchin's Summer Funny Limerick Poetry Contest

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"I can stand any ride at the fair," said my brother, so he took my dare. He rode on the Comet, and then he hurled vomit stuck disgustingly in his date's hair.

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Date: 7/19/2025 9:19:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. Your "Dare at the Fair" was a fun read and creative Limerick to write again. I have been off the computer for a few days. Have a blessed day with your win.............
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Date: 7/15/2025 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Sickenly clever!
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Date: 7/14/2025 6:52:00 AM
Eww. Great one Andrea. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 7/14/2025 2:32:00 AM
Great limerick and so funny, congratulations on your top placement
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Date: 7/13/2025 10:57:00 PM
Congratulations, dear poetess on your top win in this contest with a humorous imaginative limerick , though not pleasing to imagine. Wish you a pleasant new week.
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Date: 7/13/2025 3:04:00 PM
Gross, Dre! Congrats on your win. Dare your (fictional) brother to regurgitate a million dollars, next time and hope you win that one, too!
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Date: 7/13/2025 11:57:00 AM
Back to say, "YAY!" XO
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Date: 7/13/2025 9:08:00 AM
Andrea, Congratulations on your first place win with your hilarious limerick.
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Date: 7/7/2025 1:19:00 PM
I'm laughing, but really I shouldn't!! Even though he boasted I still feel sorry for your brother, Andrea :) Regards / paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 7/7/2025 4:08:00 PM
I know lol :) Goodnight
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/7/2025 3:46:00 PM
No brother, just made up stuff!
Date: 7/2/2025 7:13:00 PM
LOL
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Date: 7/2/2025 11:03:00 AM
Hello Andrea, some people do vomit from the rides they were on. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/2/2025 4:18:00 PM
Hello andrea, that must have been an awkward moment for you to deal with at that time. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/2/2025 2:27:00 PM
That's for sure. I was with one once
Date: 7/2/2025 10:17:00 AM
Ewe! Lol! That gross out humor we can all giggle at! Nice one! Xo
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Date: 7/1/2025 5:14:00 PM
Really good limerick in all respects, Andrea. Janice
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Date: 7/1/2025 12:05:00 AM
Lol. That was some ride. And you dared him to do that. Good one
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Date: 6/29/2025 1:32:00 PM
Your "Dare at the Fair" is a fun read and creative Limerick write. "Good Luck" I also did this contest. Have a fun day writing away............
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Date: 6/29/2025 10:38:00 AM
Lol! Talk about a bad hair day! Your fun and fantastic limerick made me giggle and cringe. Great title too! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/29/2025 6:52:00 AM
Enjoyed the humour. Your brother must have been really adventurous. As a young girl I used to go for every scary ride, if ever I got a chance. But once on the spinning wheel, I started feeling dizzy and felt like throwing up. After that I haven't dared any such thing.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/29/2025 9:06:00 AM
I just made this story up. But I did have a guy throw up at the top of a ferris wheel once. He threw up over the side of it. I hope he never hit any one with his vomit!!
Date: 6/29/2025 6:28:00 AM
Good rhyme. I like the humor. O, that poor guy's date!
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