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Dappled

"dappled reflections revitalize our love" ~ by poet In the dappled shadows, my soul is lost As darkness deepens, my heartbeat gets tossed Like a lace veil, your thoughts cover my mind Such dreams we share, affection unconfined In the dappled sunlight, wishes come true Nightmares all left behind, hope springs anew Forging forward to reach that forever Where troubles forgotten, we'll love ever In the dappled meadows, I remember Our crimson passion, a burning ember Lingering kisses float upon the breeze Under the shade of cherry blossom trees In the dappled garden, we're together Enjoying the beauty of pink heather In intimate silence, we simply rest Dappled reflections make me feel quite blessed.
7th February 2023 For Constance La France's "Writing Challenge - D words" contest

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Date: 2/21/2023 2:10:00 PM
Jo, a beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - D Forms, well done, I like the image and the quote also, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/12/2023 7:50:00 PM
"In the dappled meadows, I remember Our crimson passion, a burning ember Lingering kisses float upon the breeze Under the shade of cherry blossom trees" Love these lines. A very romantic scene you have pictured. Congratulations Jo on your first place win !
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Date: 2/11/2023 4:41:00 PM
Back with congratulations on taking first place; this is a really well-written piece that demonstrates both skills and knowledge...dear friend.
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Date: 2/11/2023 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/11/2023 11:50:00 AM
I love your tan eon the theme Jo. Fabulous rhyming too. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 2/11/2023 10:36:00 AM
Very lovely poem, Jo. Dappled is such a wonderful word. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/11/2023 7:10:00 AM
- Lovely written, Jo ... enjoy reading your entry ... congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 2/8/2023 1:12:00 PM
A lovely write/quote. Good Luck. Have a blessed day.....................
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Date: 2/8/2023 8:03:00 AM
This is so beautiful Jo. Well written :)
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Date: 2/8/2023 1:51:00 AM
Your quote is a perfect summation of your love. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/7/2023 7:48:00 AM
A beautiful and meaningful poem, Jo! Your great imagery shed more beauty on this poem. Good luck with the contest.
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