Daphne

You’re a Flower in My Garden 3-5-24  
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Daphne

Your winter child, with beguiling scent perfumes snow and rain,
I smile in January’s barrenness to herald crocus, wrens and snowdrops.

Sometimes a temperamental garden tot, don’t like wet feet,
Evergreen harbinger of bees and ladybugs and butterflies
Whispering of vernal winds in their hibernating renewal.

I watch the furry maniacs retrieve a cache of summer pine nuts 
From beneath the cloak of my protection –
Spear leaves edged in yellow like wispy winter sunshine -–
Giving back a fountain of fragrance splashing from star shaped blooms.

Robed in purple royalty, decorating winter’s threadbare garden gown,
My blossoms glow through your garden’s gloom,
A jubilee of sweet incense, heaven’s winter grace, lovingly shared.
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Peck Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 12:39 PM
So lovely, Sam. I especially loved your beautiful last verse.
Kauffman Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 10:46 AM
Thank you so much, Ann! So wonderful to hear from you! Hope you are well. My grandmother introduced me to the Daphne plant and I have loved this January bloomer ever since. It reminds me of her and her love of gardens! Sending you blessings!
Kendrick Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 1:40 PM
Ahh!! Such a nice descriptive one. I am thinking you might be describing a plant but it could be a person. Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 9:07 AM
Congratulation on your win. What a wonderful flower write. I love both the pretty "Daphne" & crocus flowers. Have a wonderful day writing away.................
Jones Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 7:33 PM
Your poem is a winner! Congratulations!
Kitchin Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 2:22 PM
Sam, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful poem!
Hind Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 5:56 PM
So lovely, Sam- a real pleasure to read
George Avatar
March 7, 2024 at 8:49 PM
Hi Sam, Your personification is so sweet and fragrant. I am not quite familiar with these plants. But from your description, I can assume that it is exotic. Of all I love the lines- "I watch the furry maniacs retrieve a cache of summer pine nuts From beneath the cloak of my protection –" I visualize it in my imagination. Squirrels spring out suddenly from under thick bushes with cumbersome foliage. Your artistry is envious and your descriptions give such sensory delight....
Ashley Avatar
March 7, 2024 at 8:33 AM
My Dearest Rhyme Time Friend, you had me at the first stanza with "beguiling scent perfumes snow and rain" -wow! such a beautiful image- and "crocus, wrens and snowdrops"! - as I adore all three :) A fantastic, expressive personification of a Winter Daphne, with gorgeous details like "Spear leaves edged in yellow like wispy winter sunshine" - such poetic sensory delights elevate your vivid verse to higher heights of amazing! Your golden pen continues to outshine the sunniest of days. Your poetic artistry warms my heart and soul so thoroughly on this raw, rainy, windy March morning in coastal Mass. Thank you, my sweet poetry sis! Warmest wishes sent in star shaped blooms.. ~Susan
Empress Avatar
March 7, 2024 at 4:26 AM
Wow this is soul warming dear samszy! I missed reading your work, and this is another one that flows just seamlessly and in such a captivating manner, like a painting, your words weave imagery , leaving your readers in awe, appreciating the artistic details, i especially loved the opening lines and also how youv written “ Sometimes a temperamental garden tot, don’t like wet feet, Evergreen harbinger of bees and ladybugs” impeccable! So creative! Loved reading this! Best wishes for the contest
Rodgers Avatar
March 6, 2024 at 12:09 PM
Dear Sam, It is quite a captivating tribute to the resilience and beauty of nature personified through the character of Daphne. Through lyrical language, you evoke the changing seasons and the enchanting presence of this winter child in your garden. The delicate balance between fragility and strength and the symbiotic relationship with furry creatures and insects is beautifully depicted. Your words are a sense of wonder and appreciation for the natural world. I love this poetic ode to the enduring spirit of Daphne and the magic of nature's renewal. - Blessings, Daniel
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