Daniel's Answer To the King, Briton Riviere

Gov'ners were jealous and zealous the satraps - 
One had received uncalled-for promotion.
With design to malign, these guys enacted
a divine trap for this fella's devotions. 

"Accept this new law," they said, "Except to you, 
O Great King, no petitions can be uttered."
A crusade to degrade, they watched Dan's window,
As he stepped up and prayed, boldly un-shuttered.

Their wily ruse worked and while he was kneeling,
they trotted off to the king and tattled.
Daniel was content to be pent up with lions, 
but King Darius spent the night rattled.

Unarmed and unharmed, Dan stayed with the beasts.
In the morning, the king raced to the hole.
The lions in a daze; sudden praise he spoke,    
"I'm amazed, God has delivered you whole." 

Hear futile complaints among brutal beasts;
Officials are punished with fear and trembling.
They take a fair turn in the lair as ordered
God takes care of revenge for dissembling.

(dissembling means misleading)

based on the account in Daniel 6:1-24
to accompany the painting by Briton Riviere, Daniel's Answer to the King, 
it seems Daniel continues to pray to his God inside the lion's den
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Poteet Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 6:25 PM
I liked writing this. Daniel's faith was not an embarrassment to God.
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July 22, 2013 at 11:56 AM
I like the way you wrote this,,,, congrats on the win ;} and thank you for reading Alcohol ;} have an awesome day Tim.
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July 19, 2013 at 8:50 PM
! Amazing story of faith in action, Reason! Congratulations on a wonderful win...well done!
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July 19, 2013 at 4:49 PM
congrats on a great win Reason
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July 19, 2013 at 8:28 AM
amazing... ... congratulations... Luv~ LINDA
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July 19, 2013 at 12:45 AM
amazing work, Reason. BIG congrats in this contest.
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July 18, 2013 at 9:56 PM
this is nice.... congrats... luv ~SKAT~
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July 18, 2013 at 6:52 PM
You have done a tremendous poem for this contest. Congrats on your super win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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July 18, 2013 at 5:17 PM
Excellent work on this piece! You have done an amazing job with how many rhymes are in this poem! Despite the limitations of the form, it still has a good flow of ideas without seeming forced to the rhyme pattern.
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July 18, 2013 at 3:58 PM
Oh, you have taken us back in time with this timeless piece!!
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July 18, 2013 at 3:44 PM
Great work that you have penned for the contest..You went the extra mile..Congrats on your win..Sara
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