Daniel's Answer To the King, Briton Riviere

Gov'ners were jealous and zealous the satraps - 
One had received uncalled-for promotion.
With design to malign, these guys enacted
a divine trap for this fella's devotions. 

"Accept this new law," they said, "Except to you, 
O Great King, no petitions can be uttered."
A crusade to degrade, they watched Dan's window,
As he stepped up and prayed, boldly un-shuttered.

Their wily ruse worked and while he was kneeling,
they trotted off to the king and tattled.
Daniel was content to be pent up with lions, 
but King Darius spent the night rattled.

Unarmed and unharmed, Dan stayed with the beasts.
In the morning, the king raced to the hole.
The lions in a daze; sudden praise he spoke,    
"I'm amazed, God has delivered you whole." 

Hear futile complaints among brutal beasts;
Officials are punished with fear and trembling.
They take a fair turn in the lair as ordered
God takes care of revenge for dissembling.

(dissembling means misleading)

based on the account in Daniel 6:1-24
to accompany the painting by Briton Riviere, Daniel's Answer to the King, 
it seems Daniel continues to pray to his God inside the lion's den

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/5/2023 6:25:00 PM
I liked writing this. Daniel's faith was not an embarrassment to God.
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Date: 7/22/2013 11:56:00 AM
I like the way you wrote this,,,, congrats on the win ;} and thank you for reading Alcohol ;} have an awesome day Tim.
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Date: 7/19/2013 8:50:00 PM
! Amazing story of faith in action, Reason! Congratulations on a wonderful win...well done!
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Date: 7/19/2013 4:49:00 PM
congrats on a great win Reason
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Date: 7/19/2013 8:28:00 AM
amazing... ... congratulations... Luv~ LINDA
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Date: 7/19/2013 12:45:00 AM
amazing work, Reason. BIG congrats in this contest.
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Date: 7/18/2013 9:56:00 PM
this is nice.... congrats... luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/18/2013 6:52:00 PM
You have done a tremendous poem for this contest. Congrats on your super win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/18/2013 5:17:00 PM
Excellent work on this piece! You have done an amazing job with how many rhymes are in this poem! Despite the limitations of the form, it still has a good flow of ideas without seeming forced to the rhyme pattern.
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Date: 7/18/2013 3:58:00 PM
Oh, you have taken us back in time with this timeless piece!!
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Date: 7/18/2013 3:44:00 PM
Great work that you have penned for the contest..You went the extra mile..Congrats on your win..Sara
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