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When ur perfect lover is 100% into everything, but then life happens and u drift apart, then wake up one day wondering what happened.

This is a fictional write.

She rode her love like a roller coaster, The danger felt up high, She loved the vulnerability of fluttering, Love throughout the sky, Her laugh, her whip, her arms thrown out, Her hair each shade of mad, She rode her ride wherever she went, Like a wondering love nomad, And she loved scorched irons from the furnace, She loved the searing brand, She loved erupting love from her heart, The love held in her hand, Until the day she looked around, To her lover on another ride, And that was when she lost her heart, Her love left her from inside.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/26/2018 9:06:00 AM
Emotional, very. I understand this poem personally. I know your blood lays on the print. Your description and depiction are so vivid and draws you within. I will learn from you. Your a passionate artist. Some artist are just that, but when you also have passion you own the art of reality too. Thank you for your comment.
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 2/26/2018 9:03:00 PM
Thank you, Mark, for this most beautiful compliment. the more of us putting 100% into revealing our real feelings and emotions the better. i'm super glad u can relate to these words Mark, cheers :)
Date: 2/8/2018 6:36:00 PM
Amazing poem Lewis. Such great flow and rhyme you have. Your muse is back indeed!!!! ~ Judy
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Date: 2/8/2018 6:40:00 PM
hi Judy, glad ur back too, glad u enjoyed this roller coaster :)
Date: 2/8/2018 6:35:00 PM
Love the imagery. Love the simile (the right word is on the tip of my tongue, anyway you know what I mean). Fabulously done, Lewis.
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Date: 2/8/2018 6:39:00 PM
simile sounds like it fits, thanks Line, glad u enjoyed this one :)

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