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Deep Dive

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human prey, clueless. hunter stalks below; moves in for the kill. jaws of death open under deep blue sea. prey in danger zone! Submitted for... Tableau 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May Photo chosen: 1 Syllables checked at www.howmanysyllables.com Date written: 03/27/2021

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/2/2021 10:08:00 AM
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Way to go in the contest, Edward! It's so fun to see the pictures people chose. Congrats.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/1/2021 11:02:00 AM
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Congratulation on your win. What a fun write. Dinner is served. Have a blessed day and Easter.......................
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/1/2021 11:22:00 AM
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Thank you so much, Paula:-) Have a blessed Easter!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 3/31/2021 11:24:00 PM
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I was contemplating to write about this one...You have done a great job Edward...Congrats on your win :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/1/2021 2:24:00 AM
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Thank you so much, Carol:-)
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/31/2021 9:40:00 PM
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Great imagery, Edward, congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/1/2021 2:24:00 AM
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Thank you very much, Eve:-)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/31/2021 2:38:00 PM
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Edward, I could almost hear the theme of "Jaws" playing with this! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/31/2021 4:06:00 PM
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Thank you very much, Kim:-) Now that was one suspenseful movie!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/31/2021 1:07:00 PM
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Heya Edward, congratulations on top spot, can feel the inevitability inexorably closing in, love your final line, great play on words, cheers David
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/31/2021 1:17:00 PM
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Thank you so much, David:-) God bless.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/31/2021 9:20:00 AM
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A great sense of the ominous, lurking danger Edward. Congratulations on your win. Blessings to you.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/31/2021 10:38:00 AM
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Thank you very much, Sam:-) Blessings to you as well, my friend!
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Date: 3/31/2021 7:29:00 AM
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Congratulations on your 1st place top win Edward, very well done
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/31/2021 10:36:00 AM
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Thank you so much, Lasaab:-)
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Joseph May
Date: 3/31/2021 5:02:00 AM
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Congrats on your win Ed, Very nicely done
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/31/2021 5:57:00 AM
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Thank you very much for my placement and congrats, Joe:-) Most obliged.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/27/2021 12:27:00 PM
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Very nicely penned piece, I feel the apprehension.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/27/2021 12:29:00 PM
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Thanks so much, M.L.:-) I'm glad you liked this poem!

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