Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

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Deep Dive

human prey, clueless.
 hunter stalks below;
 moves in for the kill.
  jaws of death open
 under deep blue sea.
 prey in danger zone!


Submitted for...
Tableau 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Joseph May
Photo chosen: 1
Syllables checked at www.howmanysyllables.com
Date written: 03/27/2021

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Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2021 at 10:08 AM Way to go in the contest, Edward! It's so fun to see the pictures people chose. Congrats.

Paula Goldsmith April 1, 2021 at 11:02 AM Congratulation on your win. What a fun write. Dinner is served. Have a blessed day and Easter....................... Edward Ibeh April 1, 2021 at 11:22 AM Thank you so much, Paula:-) Have a blessed Easter!

Carol Mitra March 31, 2021 at 11:24 PM I was contemplating to write about this one...You have done a great job Edward...Congrats on your win :) Edward Ibeh April 1, 2021 at 2:24 AM Thank you so much, Carol:-)

Eve Roper March 31, 2021 at 9:40 PM Great imagery, Edward, congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve Edward Ibeh April 1, 2021 at 2:24 AM Thank you very much, Eve:-)

Kim Merryman March 31, 2021 at 2:38 PM Edward, I could almost hear the theme of "Jaws" playing with this! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M Edward Ibeh March 31, 2021 at 4:06 PM Thank you very much, Kim:-) Now that was one suspenseful movie!

David Kavanagh March 31, 2021 at 1:07 PM Heya Edward, congratulations on top spot, can feel the inevitability inexorably closing in, love your final line, great play on words, cheers David Edward Ibeh March 31, 2021 at 1:17 PM Thank you so much, David:-) God bless.

Sam Kauffman March 31, 2021 at 9:20 AM A great sense of the ominous, lurking danger Edward. Congratulations on your win. Blessings to you. Edward Ibeh March 31, 2021 at 10:38 AM Thank you very much, Sam:-) Blessings to you as well, my friend!

Sotto Poet March 31, 2021 at 7:29 AM Congratulations on your 1st place top win Edward, very well done Edward Ibeh March 31, 2021 at 10:36 AM Thank you so much, Lasaab:-)

Joseph May March 31, 2021 at 5:02 AM Congrats on your win Ed, Very nicely done Edward Ibeh March 31, 2021 at 5:57 AM Thank you very much for my placement and congrats, Joe:-) Most obliged.

M. L. Kiser March 27, 2021 at 12:27 PM Very nicely penned piece, I feel the apprehension. Edward Ibeh March 27, 2021 at 12:29 PM Thanks so much, M.L.:-) I'm glad you liked this poem!