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Dane Ann a Cool Name, Mine

Dane, “Little Dane” was my precious birth name. And I dearly loved my grandma who was also named, Dane. Naturally, at times, by mistake, folks said, “Jane.” Each time, “Dane…like a Great-Dane” rectification came. After many years searching genealogy, I discovered. No boys, but girls had great-grandfather Dane’s name. Naturally, surprised, proud of the name just the same. Adding Ann with no E…to me, Dane Ann, was conferred. Corrections were often needed; I could count on fun, too. Opportunities for attention ah, rapping at my name’s door. Over the years, receiving Mr. Dane mail I did not adore. Laughed loud when I was drafted, no girls, then, I knew. Now that joke was on me; I reported the mistake. And before I left for home, a dotted line I did see. My, the Army sounds great…an education for me! Events made me shake; the war made me quake. My name is Dane, not Jane, not “Puddin’-n-tane” It is not, James, John, or Penny-whinney-jinxsaw! Not Sally or Sue, but a life-name with no flaw. Easy to spell; it's for boys, and for me, D-A-N-E, Dane. © February 16, 2011 Dane Smith-Johnsen An acrostic poem written in “Enclosed Rhyme”

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Date: 3/5/2011 6:23:00 AM
Congrats Dane on your big win in this contest of Linda--kashinath
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Date: 3/4/2011 4:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2011 12:12:00 AM
many warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/3/2011 4:56:00 PM
really cool, dane... kudos for the wonderful winning spot! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/3/2011 1:45:00 PM
Yes, I always thought that like NIkko's name, yours was one of the most unusual for a woman, but the Ann attached to it makes it most unique and a pretty name too.Congrats on your win, DAne-ann!
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Date: 3/3/2011 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Linda, Dane
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Date: 3/3/2011 9:58:00 AM
wonderful entry .love that you incorporated the acrostic into it, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 3/3/2011 9:30:00 AM
Congrats Dane Ann on your third place win in my contest What's in a Name with this superb entry .. thankxx for your constant support luv..
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Date: 2/19/2011 4:36:00 AM
you'll always be my Dane Ann. john
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Date: 2/17/2011 10:35:00 AM
very clever, acrostic as well as the enclosed rhyme, great job Dane, best of luck in the contest
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Date: 2/17/2011 7:06:00 AM
Awesome explanation to your beautiful name Dane. Loved it.
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:20:00 AM
Good one that reads like a winner..I enjoyed learning about the history of your name..Good luck in the contest..Sara
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