Dane Ann a Cool Name, Mine

Dane, “Little Dane” was my precious birth name.
And I dearly loved my grandma who was also named, Dane.
Naturally, at times, by mistake, folks said, “Jane.”
Each time, “Dane…like a Great-Dane” rectification came.
 
After many years searching genealogy, I discovered.
No boys, but girls had great-grandfather Dane’s name.
Naturally, surprised, proud of the name just the same.    
Adding Ann with no E…to me, Dane Ann, was conferred.

Corrections were often needed; I could count on fun, too.
Opportunities for attention ah, rapping at my name’s door.
Over the years, receiving Mr. Dane mail I did not adore.
Laughed loud when I was drafted, no girls, then, I knew.

Now that joke was on me; I reported the mistake.
And before I left for home, a dotted line I did see.
My, the Army sounds great…an education for me!
Events made me shake; the war made me quake.

My name is Dane, not Jane, not “Puddin’-n-tane”
It is not, James, John, or Penny-whinney-jinxsaw! 
Not Sally or Sue, but a life-name with no flaw.
Easy to spell; it's for boys, and for me, D-A-N-E, Dane. 

© February 16, 2011
Dane Smith-Johnsen

An acrostic poem written in “Enclosed Rhyme”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 5, 2011 at 6:23 AM
Congrats Dane on your big win in this contest of Linda--kashinath
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March 4, 2011 at 4:23 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 12:12 AM
many warm congrats for this win.
Onclaud Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 4:56 PM
really cool, dane... kudos for the wonderful winning spot! :) huggs, nette
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March 3, 2011 at 1:45 PM
Yes, I always thought that like NIkko's name, yours was one of the most unusual for a woman, but the Ann attached to it makes it most unique and a pretty name too.Congrats on your win, DAne-ann!
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March 3, 2011 at 12:09 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Linda, Dane
Roberts Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 9:58 AM
wonderful entry .love that you incorporated the acrostic into it, congrats on your win in the contest
Sweetheart Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 9:30 AM
Congrats Dane Ann on your third place win in my contest What's in a Name with this superb entry .. thankxx for your constant support luv..
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February 19, 2011 at 4:36 AM
you'll always be my Dane Ann. john
Roberts Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 10:35 AM
very clever, acrostic as well as the enclosed rhyme, great job Dane, best of luck in the contest
Mannan Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 7:06 AM
Awesome explanation to your beautiful name Dane. Loved it.
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February 17, 2011 at 6:20 AM
Good one that reads like a winner..I enjoyed learning about the history of your name..Good luck in the contest..Sara
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