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Dandelion Wishes

Dancing through a field of awakened childhood dreams, Anticipating summer days bursting at the seams, Nature calls a shy, young girl outdoors to explore. Dandelion heads of gold cannot be ignored. Eager to wish on the wind, she picks a bunch to blow. Laughing as she chases fluff, seeds search for soil to grow. I remember that young girl and all she dared to wish. Often thoughts slip back in time to memories embellished. Never again have I felt that young, so hopeful and free Waiting for tomorrow and life's possibilities. I could wrap myself awhile in these ornate dreams, Savoring memories made in the summer's golden beams. Happiness danced along with petals in the wind. Each time I see dandelions, the joy returns like an old friend Someday, I might pick a bunch to chase wishes again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/7/2014 12:30:00 PM
lovely acrostic Rhonda with good rhyme too, really enjoyed this write, well done, God bless, Gordon
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Date: 6/2/2014 5:54:00 AM
Enjoyed the write. congrats on your poem being featured this week,
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Date: 5/22/2012 7:18:00 PM
many congrats on your win Rhonda with this great acrostic
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Date: 5/22/2012 1:42:00 PM
Rhonda congrats on your win..david
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Date: 5/21/2012 9:28:00 AM
wow...beautiful. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/21/2012 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Any Old Acrostic" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2012 6:54:00 AM
I like the way you slipped all the rhymes as well. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/20/2012 5:19:00 PM
congrats on your win Rhonda..always..Joseph
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Date: 5/20/2012 4:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Rhonda. Awesome. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 5/17/2012 7:59:00 PM
Do hope you had a very Happy Mother's Day, Rhonda! I know you are a beautiful mother from your writing. I love this poem, "Dandelion Wishes". You have such a way with words...you bring them to life. God bless you, hugs, Maureen
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Date: 5/16/2012 1:57:00 AM
captures the essence of innocence. A very beautiful poem.
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Date: 5/16/2012 1:56:00 AM
captures the essence of innocence. A very beautiful poem.
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Date: 5/16/2012 1:48:00 AM
Rhonda very nice memories, I like it..David
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