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Dandelion Field

If I could I would buy that dandelion field for you
I saw in a village overseas,
Where the blossoms are bright yellow like the sun
and grows up to your knees,
You could bestow millions of wishes on the seeds and
let the wind carry them away,
If I could I would buy that dandelion field for you
as a gift for your birthday.

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Date: 8/12/2025 4:42:00 PM
sounds like a perfect gift! Flowing rhyme scheme made for a smooth and engaging read. have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Riley Ryleigh
Date: 8/13/2025 12:55:00 PM
Indeed, for all dandelion lovers! Thank you Sara. :)
Date: 8/12/2025 3:08:00 PM
Nice Rhyme poetry, Riley. I like the imagery and the words flowed well. A poet in Texas, Bill
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Riley Ryleigh
Date: 8/13/2025 12:52:00 PM
Thank you Bill. :) There is such a field by the way. It was really beautiful.
Date: 8/12/2025 12:15:00 PM
Very pretty. I love " bestow millions of wishes." Wonderful!
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Riley Ryleigh
Date: 8/12/2025 12:34:00 PM
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the read. :)

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