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Dancing With the Rain

There came today a shower of delight, which pitter-pattered on my window pane. With youth’s exuberance, my mind took flight. Outside I ran, embracing April’s rain. How sweet its scent! My soul was filled with mirth, for I was truly living in the “now.” Upon my lips, I tasted earth’s rebirth as spring’s refreshment fell upon my brow. I paused nearby my ornamental pear, inhaling deeply, hearing skyfall’s sound. The world was singing; fragrance filled the air. I then began to twirl and twirl around. Oh, how I wish to feel that way again - so young and hope-filled, dancing with the rain!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/2/2020 9:52:00 AM
A feeling we all share. Brought back memories.
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Date: 4/15/2018 1:55:00 PM
LOVELY, Andrea ! So cheerfully delightful.
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Date: 5/29/2017 1:08:00 AM
I still like dancing in the rain :) 7
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Date: 11/23/2016 3:56:00 PM
This brings back so many good memories of my childhood! I loved springtime rains. All decked out in our yellow hooded raincoats and boots, splashing in mud puddles, wading in a swollen creek, sailing paper boats, etc....LOVE this poem! BIG congrats my friend - Tim
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Date: 11/23/2016 12:06:00 PM
Andrea congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful poem
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Date: 2/22/2016 8:47:00 AM
Brought me back to my carefree youth!!.. Congrats on top win dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 2/22/2016 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on the success of this poem! Continue writing and share the blessings of poetry! :) _hans
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Date: 2/21/2016 8:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful rain dance. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 2/21/2016 3:39:00 PM
A beautiful Sonnet Andrea, i do enjoy walking in the rain, a dance, why not. A fun filled seven in my book. congratulations for your superb winning entry....Mike.
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Date: 2/21/2016 12:48:00 PM
Lovely Sonnet, Andrea. Congratulations on your First Place win in the 'rainy days' contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:04:00 AM
This is enchanting, dear Andrea!! Congratulations on your amazing win!! :D :D
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Date: 2/21/2016 9:10:00 AM
This is indeed a beautiful poem making me want again to dance and play in the rain. Many CONGRATS on your top win my dear friend, Andrea! thanks a lot for sharing! love lots and big hugs, GL.
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Date: 2/21/2016 6:50:00 AM
I used to love to dance in the rain as a child, this took me back to those memories :) Congrats on your awesome win ... hugs
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Date: 2/21/2016 6:12:00 AM
A truly happy poem:) Congrats on your win:}
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Date: 2/21/2016 4:29:00 AM
makes me want to swirl away, andie... big cheers on your win!..huggs
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Date: 2/21/2016 4:29:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea. It DID make me think of Gene Kelly and "Singin' in the Rain."
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Date: 2/21/2016 2:11:00 AM
nice poem and congrats on the win
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Date: 2/20/2016 10:38:00 PM
Very nice write!!
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Date: 2/20/2016 9:46:00 PM
Andrea, thank you for the Rainy Day theme win. With Love... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/20/2016 9:05:00 PM
Andrea, Thanks for the Support *SKAT*
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Date: 12/24/2015 5:20:00 PM
My friend, a beautiful poem that expresses a deeper appreciation of rain and its great gifts! Congrats on your win my friend!!
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Date: 12/24/2015 5:12:00 AM
Wonderful write Andrea.. Congrats on the win
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Date: 12/24/2015 2:17:00 AM
ANDREA, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smiles & Joy **SKAT**
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Date: 12/23/2015 4:36:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea, and very uplifting in spirit. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/27/2014 10:15:00 AM
You haven't lived until you've been to Glastonbury When its raining , Dancing to live bands when you are up to your knee's in mud is an experience not to be missed. Spent this morning paying some of those silly bills you told me about, lol
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