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Dancing With the Ghosts

undressed recent ghosts dance silent monotony from toneless music

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 7/14/2021 12:10:00 PM
I enjoyed your Haiku. It left me wanting to know more. Who are these ghost? Why are they undressed? :-) I particularly enjoyed your last line. "from toneless music" sounds like my singing.
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Date: 7/17/2021 7:57:00 PM
They are all newly arrived ghosts, they are stripped of the terrestrial clothing they don't need... I also liked that you appreciated my poetry... salute, dear Joanna alkas

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