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Dancing With the Devil

Lost between the borders of heaven and hell, confusion led to this story, one must tell. Surrounded by a world full of violence, I closed my eyes and took a vow of silence. Wondering if this life was even real, weird chills and shivers, one began to feel. Suddenly a figure appeared in a shroud, in darkness, his words echoed ever so loud. “If you dare, come closer and take a chance, won’t you give me the pleasure of one dance? Do not fear for I am not violent, why are you the one who is silent?” “Why should one become your willing dancer, so that you can fill my mind with cancer? You are nothing but a ferocious beast, go now, upon my soul you shall not feast.” “I know all about your forgotten schemes, I’m the one who can bring you your dreams.” Thou shall not sin, come leave this humdrum city, let me show you a life, ever so pretty. Can’t you see we are all the same breed, they will all follow if you plant my seed.” Louder and louder his words would repeat, effecting the rhythm of my heart beat. This was no simple case of confusion, for this image was causing much delusion. Then again, life can become an illusion, when one chooses, a life full of seclusion. “I must decline this dance you want so badly, for you this poem will end, rather sadly. For, I seek a path of peaceful harmony, my soul cannot sing with you in symphony. Nothing here for you, so be on your way, this time your words shall not lead me astray.” Scorned he left with a sly grin on his face, vowing to return again to this place. Inside, something that day seemed to have died. Resisting temptation filled me with pride. For him this was just a sinister game, but, I could never live a life of shame. After all I was my mother’s son, strong – after all had been said and done.
The Silent One Originally posted on 1 May 2017, re posted 19 January 2019.
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Macfarlane Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 11:30 PM
Wow.. .love this!!! Excellent write. Going to my favs. Hugs
Babcock Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 1:51 PM
So much evil in the world today and so easily to get led astray . Powerful poem. love phyl
Proxenos Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 12:29 PM
This is an amazing poem Silent one - your imagination soars! So well penned and so real - he always trys to tempt - we just send him back to hell! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Wise Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 9:19 AM
Nice! Well thought out and it created vivid imagery in my mind. Terrific conclusion! Congratulations! :)
Wolf Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 8:32 PM
Wow! Shades of Washington Irving's, "the Devil and Tom Walker," as well as Nathaniel Hawthorne's "Young Goodman Brown." Superior poesy here, well deserving of POTW. So well-crafted, Silent!! Best wishes, Gershon
La France Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 1:41 PM
Silent congratulations on having your wonderful poem selected as POTW, enjoy the honor.
Raven Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 8:25 PM
Hi Silent, dropping back with my congratulations on your much-deserved Poem Of the Week with this exceptional write. Have a wonderful week ahead. Your friend always....Mike.
Rushing Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 8:13 PM
Congratulations Silent One on POTW!
Nicole Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 1:37 PM
Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the week. ~ Brandy
La France Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 12:04 PM
Silent, wow and wow, what a fantastic poem, a fav for me and that music was so beautiful, those singers were truly divine and sublime ~
Wanter Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 9:51 AM
The depth of your writing is so very enjoyable. Congratulations! Two for two!
Palli Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 9:34 AM
Awesome, silent one! Love it. Glad it is featured.
May Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 5:28 AM
Your poetry always puts me in awe my friend, my tiny dictionary in my mind does not allow me to express into words about this poem so that being said: This is AWESOME!
Rushing Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 8:54 PM
A very deep poem Silent One! I am glad you had a wise Mother to guide you! Have blessed evening my friend.
Nicole Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 7:28 PM
This is deep and powerful. It is very easy to follow and allow the wicked to lead, yet one can flee such a moment- like dancing with the devil. Well said Silent One. ~ Brandy
Messina Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 6:48 PM
After all that was said and done...you wrote another brilliant poem, SO! Evil surrounds us all, so much in this world. Good thing there is a god.
Carber Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 10:10 AM
Powerfully done, and it is good to show that evil still exists as a force in the world.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 11:49 AM
We need to block out that evil voice, and going within is one way to triumph. Excellent Silent! : ) xxoo
Michael Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 11:44 AM
Well, well, this is real... a refreshing write, with living personalities expressed in ink...I think it's wonderful...
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 7:25 PM
I really like the ending you gave this one! your mother's son. That says a lot about the kind of wonderful mother you had, Silent One.
One Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 7:58 AM
Thank you.. Mother's always know best..
Wanter Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 7:04 PM
Your poetry is always so meaningful and touching. Wish every mother's son would read it.
One Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 7:58 AM
I agree.. Thank you..
Andresen Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 3:23 PM
- This expression appeared in my thoughts : "Å stirre døden i hvitøyet" ...it fits perfectly in Norwegian ... but, not so good in English :))) - An awesome write, my friend - Enjoy a Happy Weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 8:00 AM
I wonder about that expression now... Thank you Anne-Lise..
Onclaud Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 1:51 PM
now that is truly an awakening, a choice to dance with the light, S.O... what a compelling work which deserves to be read again... beautiful!...huggs
One Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 8:04 AM
I would never recommend dancing with the devil or his demons... Thanks Nette..
Krutsinger Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 12:24 PM
She went straight to my FAV list, Silent One. No words could do her justice, as she has done justice to herself, my friend. Many blessings for your thoughtfulness and the love you always show in your poems.
One Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 8:05 AM
Yes, ignore the voices... Thanks Caren, glad you liked it..
Babcock Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 12:05 PM
I cheered as you withdrew from the dance with devil. A awesome write with a great story line. love phyl
One Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 8:05 AM
Thank you.. He has no power over me..
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