Dancing With Butterflies

"dancing with butterflies"

as day breaks with promises
butterflies gracefully shadow me
causing me to be a ballerina
dancing effortlessly by the sea
everlasting is this moment of light
forever engraved with freedom
giving me a breath of oxygen
holding the thought to carry on

I enlist and follow the dream
joining beauty of butterflies
knowing they will show the way
leading to extraordinary senses
making the sun shine and moon glow
never a hesitation or missing beat
only open windows with possibilities
placing my soul alive and free

quietly all butterflies fly away
resting knowing my spirit is whole
sprinkling their grace upon me
taking with them darkness and pain

SkyWatcher
11-01-23

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 11/25/2023 9:39:00 AM
What a light-hearted poem, I love butterflies so much , I even have 3 Of them tattooed on the side of my ankle together with an evil eye in the middle, I also have butterfly T-shirts 'Quietly all butterflies fly away, resting knowing my spirit is whole' awesome words Lisa my friend. I have thought of you so often but I have been off soup for a while catching With my life - I would or will never desert you my very special friend. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.
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Date: 11/8/2023 6:48:00 AM
What a truly delightful poem dear Lisa. Such a joy to read. ‘ Butterflies gracefully shadow me’ ‘ making the sun shine and moon glow’ -gorgeous lines! So creatively written with delicacy. The last verse is very profound and very touching. A real pleasure reading today my sweet friend. Thank you! Hugs and smiles to you xx
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 11/9/2023 4:38:00 AM
Good Morning Christina. Hi. It is I who thanks you. Truly. Thank you. Never do I take reviews visits or commentary for granted especially for such generosity. It is my hope that my work and entry deserve your praise. Truly. I will see you on your page soon. Have a beautiful morning. Peace and Blessings always (smile)
Date: 11/3/2023 4:51:00 PM
Adding this one to my FAVs list, Lisa. lovely thoughts and matching images through your poetic words, my dear friend. Butterflies are special to Sara and me. Her dad late in life took to raising them. A joyful experience for him and something that stays with us now that he has passed. Thanks for sharing this uplift poem with us. Hugs, Bill
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 11/9/2023 4:35:00 AM
Dear Bill. Good Morning. It is I who thanks you for your review and commentary to which is most generous. Yes, I love the story that I just saw from Sara of her dad. How beautiful. Truly. I'm sorry for this late response. May today be a great day in every way for both you and Sara. I will see you soon on your page. Peace and Blessings always... (smile) Thank you Thank you Bill
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