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Written 11th March 2025

Dancing with Angels 

One’s never too hot for angels to handle. Quote - Poet’s own For the glamorous Marilyn Monroe Completely out of their minds men would go Her hour glass figure Sent them a-dither When her two beauties were out there on show. As a blonde bombshell Marilyn was known Her face and her shape got her on a throne Some folk liked it hot When wild the wind got Up went her frock, to her shock all was shown. Marilyn wished to be star, perchance Through exciting years she’d act, sing and dance In films she appeared She lost all her fears And she was never without a romance. Sadly Marilyn met her end too soon Now she's flying somewhere over the moon A proven actress In heaven's love nest Dancing and singing with angels in tune.

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Date: 3/26/2025 8:39:00 AM
up went her frock/ the famous photo A nice tribute well written
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/28/2025 7:24:00 AM
Thank you William, appreciated… Beryl
Date: 3/16/2025 9:26:00 AM
A great tribute to Merilyn Monroe in limerick form. She was indeed a beauty queen and a great actor. Men were so fascinated by her beauty. But sad was her end. Beautifully composed poem, Beryl. Let us hope that she is still mesmerizing even the angels of heaven with her beauty!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/17/2025 12:23:00 PM
Thank you Valsa, yes Marilyn Monroe was a beauty queen and a fine actress too. I do hope she’s happy in heaven, but then who wouldn’t be… Beryl
Date: 3/15/2025 6:07:00 PM
Thanks Beryl. Some Like it Hot was broadcast on TCM, and I watched it recently for kicks. She had some insight into how to move and speak in a way that few women have. It's some kind of overload on sex attraction that tickles one's fancy. It's actually funny. Sad she never found true happiness in her home life. Sad really. I thought she could act well and was sorry to hear what happened. I remember I was 11 and sad because I wanted to meet her (lol). Her demise reveals what happiness requires.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/17/2025 12:20:00 PM
Hi Duke, it is sad what happened to Marilyn Monroe, she was a good actress as well as being very beautiful, who knows what was going on in her mind to come to such a tragic demise. Thank you, Beryl
Date: 3/14/2025 11:31:00 AM
Lovely tribute limerick sister Beryl, I remember the day she passed like it was only yesterday.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/14/2025 1:47:00 PM
Thank you brother John, I remember that very sad day too… Sis Beryl
Date: 3/13/2025 2:31:00 AM
For me this is a unique but sad poem. Which angel is she dancing with? Your limerick are perfect.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/13/2025 4:01:00 AM
We’ll never know who Marilyn dances with in heaven, but maybe one day we will all get to find out. Thank you Victor… Beryl
Date: 3/12/2025 12:26:00 PM
What a powerful yet sad Limerick writes you have here. Great Ending and Quote. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away...............
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/12/2025 1:50:00 PM
Thank you Paula, have read your poem on the same theme and commented on your lovely Acrostic. Enjoy your poetic day too… Beryl
Date: 3/12/2025 7:36:00 AM
Very well-written limericks, Beryl! Some think she had help dying!! Janice
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/12/2025 10:32:00 AM
I don’t suppose we’ll ever know the circumstances of her demise. Thank you Janice… Beryl
Date: 3/12/2025 12:04:00 AM
Good one Beryl. Norma Jean would like it!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/12/2025 2:01:00 AM
I hope she would like this, maybe she is still singing and dancing on heaven’s shore… Beryl

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