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Dancing To the Music of Fireflies

Sound of gravel crunching On a lonely country lane Then parking neath an ol’ Oak Tree Radio softly playing An ol’ George Jones song Of broken hearts and misery The hypnotic rise, before one’s eyes That only fireflies can bring The swirling sigh of hormone’s tide The intoxicating smell of spring The night slips by The moon hangs high honey locust blossoms scent the air My hands cradle your head I bury my face in the musky perfume of your hair Your lips to mine Our legs and arms entwined Our bodies start to sway And we slow dance… To the music of fireflies …Until the light of day…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/24/2012 9:07:00 PM
This, I should admit, is the most romantic poetry I've ever gotten engrossed with in PoetrySoup. Thanks for sharing your masterpiece, Mr. David. Just a tip to help you get by: You will need to go to any poem of the poet(who made a comment to yours) you wish to respond to for your response to be read. Enjoy! Keep inspiring, Sir! :)
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David O'Haolin Whalen
Date: 6/26/2012 7:44:00 PM
Thanks much Glenn, I just visited your blog and you're no slouch yourself! This was written from experience, so there's a lot of truth and my heart in there
Date: 6/21/2012 4:40:00 PM
Aaaah!Such expressive and descriptive romantic work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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Date: 6/20/2012 9:49:00 PM
Beautiful......Early morning before leaving for work, I must say it made me smile! :)
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David O'Haolin Whalen
Date: 6/21/2012 4:19:00 PM
I feel blessed when I can make someone smile. Thanks for making that happen.
Date: 6/20/2012 9:26:00 PM
beautiful write
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David O'Haolin Whalen
Date: 6/21/2012 4:21:00 PM
And many thanks to a fellow writer/poet that respect very much

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