Dancing On Nails

Anger streams from her pores,
Like sweat on a July day.
Her mood swings from frustration, to love,
         to sadness.
As a family splinters before her eyes.

I stand impotent, in many ways.  Fear
grips my throat like a vise squeezing 
         my emotions,
from eyes unable to cry.
I absorb.  The pain consumes my heart.
Nothing works the way it should.

The future stands as an unpaved road,
littered with glass and nails.  There are no
shoes for me, only a body not working, and
my exhausted mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 9, 2009 at 3:42 PM
Hi Will, A very real hearted outstanding poetic write. Welcome to Poetry Soup! Look forward to reading more of your poems. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Thanks for sharing, we're all amonst friends here. Love Light Patty
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November 9, 2009 at 12:26 PM
hey! nice poem...welcome to poetry soup... :P
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November 8, 2009 at 6:42 PM
Very nice poem...Welcome to poetry soup...enjoyed...Marty
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