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Dancing On a Breeze

I watch these leaves lifting off the ground in the chase of winds and pretend it’s you playfully chasing me around the room in a seductive tease suddenly I’m twirling with them aloft in the whisk of your arms and autumn doesn’t seem so cold in the warmth of these thoughts lingering

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/10/2019 4:21:00 PM

A novel way to warm up, I must say... Beats that autumn chill every time. ~ Mind over matter

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/10/2019 5:24:00 PM

the weather has been goofy...yesterday 34 and windy, today warmer, tomorrow 60 with rain moving in, by morning in the teens with snow....got to scurry for warmth somewhere right? hugs

John Hamilton

Date: 11/9/2019 8:02:00 PM

Sweet sweet words that only you can write, no one blends emotions with nature like you Sandy. Lovely write enjoyed!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/9/2019 9:17:00 PM

Thank you so much John ... I spent a lot Of time in nature to comfort me ... I think that’s why I can write this way :) hugs

Juliet Ligon

Date: 11/9/2019 1:24:00 PM

Sweet and comforting contrast to the bleakness this time of year.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/9/2019 9:15:00 PM

Thank you Juliet. We had snow squalls already. Been very cold here.!

Silent One

Date: 11/9/2019 11:12:00 AM

If only it was so simple... Nice write

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/9/2019 9:15:00 PM

Thank you my friend ... so true .... hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/9/2019 5:05:00 AM

Romance in the air, in a ballgown of leaves.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/9/2019 6:40:00 AM

Thanks Kim....i have a good imagination at times, especially when sitting in the park, in my bus with the radio on....music helps inspire me at times, but nature always does... hugs :)

Hello There

Date: 11/8/2019 11:00:00 PM

Perfectly romantic, Sandra! Like a scene from a movie ~ so easy to imagine and precious, my friend :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/9/2019 6:37:00 AM

Thank you my friend....my first thought watching the leaves was children tumbling down the hills...but then two lifted together and started to dance around each other....:) hugs

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/8/2019 6:11:00 PM

Teasey breezy, for you...titillating thoughts Sandra...hey my friend, I'm from- a small town called lupia-scigliano provincia di cosenza...utza matter for u, pasta e fagiu...una bella ragazza di Italia... piacere di conoscerti...ciao bellissima...^WW^ :o)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/8/2019 6:46:00 PM

grazie, vorrei parlare meglio l'italiano my grandparents and relatives spoke it fluently around us but didn't want to teach us because little pictures have big ears, that way they could speak without us knowing of what...my grandmother taught me a little, but she passed when i was 9...my mom used every curse word imaginable, we knew it when we repeated one of those words... i speak to my family over there with the aid of google translate, they do speak some english from talking with family here~

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/8/2019 4:27:00 PM

Beautiful word-play in warmth of love.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/8/2019 6:47:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend... :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 11/8/2019 2:40:00 PM

You never cease to amaze me or take my breath away. Where do these wonderful poems come from, wait, don't tell me, they must come straight from your heart. So beautiful my friend, I just loved this.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/8/2019 6:50:00 PM

my mind is a very creative thing my friend and yeah i guess i draw off my heart and soul sometimes.... thank you so much for your beautiful comment...hugs :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/8/2019 2:35:00 PM

What a gorgeous write Sandra!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/8/2019 2:39:00 PM

Thank you so much Caren. Nature often inspires me :) hugs

Ann Foster

Date: 11/8/2019 2:35:00 PM

Wow girl. You know how to floor me. That was so romantic. Ann

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/8/2019 2:38:00 PM

Shhh don’t be telling anyone I have a romantic side ... lol thank you so much my friend. It’s very cold here and I am trying to find warmth :) hugs