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Dancing Lovers

Holding your hand by your bed late last night I remembered that day you first came into my sight I knew then and there you were the one meant for me And together from then on we always would be. You played it so coy, pretending not to know That my eyes followed you everywhere that you would go But you kept looking over with such subtle glances As I worked up the nerve to ask you for a few dances. We danced through the night, we danced cheek to cheek We danced every song till our knees both grew weak We have danced ever since through the laughter and tears But our dancing has now ended after so many years. I felt you slip away sometime during the darkness You went up to heaven to dance on the clouds Please wait for me darling, I’ll be joining you shortly And we can continue our dancing to harps playing so loud. We danced through the night, we danced cheek to cheek We danced every song till our knees both grew weak We have danced ever since through the laughter and tears But our dancing has now ended after so many years.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/1/2010 6:43:00 AM
This is so wonderful! I like the images the poem sends, and the touch of togetherness in love it emulates. Dancing is also a great way to exercise and keep the body in shape. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/1/2010 6:31:00 AM
A very passionate write! So sweet and sad at the same time! kisses, Emily
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Date: 5/31/2010 9:09:00 PM
Well, does someone have a tissue? :) A very moving love poem. What a wonderful dedication to your wife and yes, she'll be waiting. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 5/31/2010 7:05:00 PM
yur really goood! this made me fall in love(: haha, yur a great writer! (:
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Date: 5/31/2010 3:13:00 PM
This is absolutely stunning. Beautiful and sad.
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Date: 5/31/2010 2:10:00 PM
SAd one, Joe, is it true?? I can't recall if you ever told me your age or anything. MY memory is so bad for how old people are here or their jobs, etc. Anyway, I enjoyed this. And the way you related it to a dance to continue in heaven! I really appreciate your friendship here and your lovely comment to me today. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 5/31/2010 12:59:00 PM
So lovely and romantic Joe and dancing is a great prelude to luv and so much more... so good to read an uplifting piece of poetry on site today after so many reads from early morning... thankxxx .. with luv from the "Sweetheart" ..keep this one for a contest.. am sure one will pop up..
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