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Dancing in the Rain

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Written June 26 2025 for What The World Loves contest sponsored by Onette Cloud

Asphalt a black vault Trapping heat like chain Link to earth is tossed Dancing in the rain Washing all blue pain

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Howard Kerr

Date: 6/29/2025 7:24:00 PM

Hi Karen, Congratulations on your selection with this creative piece. The impeccable imagery, narrative and flow are a credit to you Thanks for your kind comments on my success Howard

Karen Jones
Date: 6/29/2025 7:29:00 PM

Appreciate that and you’re welcome Howard!

David Crandall

Date: 6/29/2025 6:03:00 PM

Great images, rhythm, rhyme, and message - congratulations!

Karen Jones
Date: 6/29/2025 6:37:00 PM

Thanks!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2025 12:20:00 PM

This is fantastic, so well-deserving of a top placement, Karen.

Karen Jones
Date: 6/29/2025 12:48:00 PM

Thanks Andrea I was surprised pleasantly! Competition was steep! Lol

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/29/2025 9:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Dancing in the Rain" write. Have a blessed day with your win...........

Karen Jones
Date: 6/29/2025 9:49:00 AM

Have a blessed day as well sweet Paula and thanks!

Crystol Woods

Date: 6/29/2025 6:33:00 AM

So cool! Love the chain and linked image! Congratulations! Xo

Karen Jones
Date: 6/29/2025 6:57:00 AM

Thanks Crystol!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/28/2025 7:33:00 PM

Congrats! Interesting imagery!

Karen Jones
Date: 6/28/2025 7:51:00 PM

Thanks!

Len Gasun

Date: 6/28/2025 6:34:00 PM

Gorgeous and very uplifting! I love this and so enjoyed. Thanks for sharing my dear poet friend! Big Congrats on your well-deserved first place win! Cheers and hugs!

Karen Jones
Date: 6/28/2025 7:50:00 PM

Wow I wasn't aware I placed! Thanks!