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I lounged in silence, Overwhelmed by beauty, Invigorated and at peace Beneath the graceful willow. In this tranquil state I felt and absorbed The hazy waning shafts of moonlight Interlaced with wafts of perfumes Of the whitish flowers of the queen of the night, The mighty selenicereus That climbed the greenish trellis Of my earthly paradise. Every color of the darkening rose, Every shade that hid the sleepy birds, Every sound of cicadas that sang to the moon, Every precious second that passed Was but an undying serenade. Oh that such a moment Would never have an end. For this was an eternal dance Upon a fair land Where nature led the band With extreme serenity, Directed with all unearthly charm Life's infinite continuum.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/13/2021 2:52:00 PM
Evocative writing Victory. Quite beautiful. :) Linda
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Date: 1/13/2021 3:59:00 AM
'sound of cicadas that sang to the moon' Wow Victor, such intoxicating words that bring your imagery to life in this wonderful poetry~ thank you my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 1/12/2021 9:31:00 PM
WoW! Victor, You’ve penned such a wonderful piece with amazing content and imagery. Your descriptions paint such a lovely picture with words. Well done:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/12/2021 6:40:00 AM
This is just gorgeous. Dancing in the moonlight. Beautiful imagery, Vic :)
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Date: 1/11/2021 9:35:00 PM
Exceptional and wonderful imagery Victor. A favorite for me my friend...
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Date: 1/11/2021 8:49:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Victor. Your words speak volumes. Wishing you a wonderful week :)
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Date: 1/11/2021 7:26:00 PM
The moon and fragrant white flowers, and the phrase 'queen of the night,' make such exquisite imagery-I could go on and on! It's a Fave. :=)
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Date: 1/11/2021 5:07:00 PM
Lovely, my friend!
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Date: 1/11/2021 1:34:00 PM
- A beautiful picture ... with a romantic effect, Victor :) - Love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/11/2021 12:50:00 PM
Enjoyed the dance of your beautiful verses, Victor. Excellent write from start to finish--I especially loved the third stanza.
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Date: 1/11/2021 11:53:00 AM
Nature sings her poetry...Well done.
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Date: 1/11/2021 11:45:00 AM
his is just so beautiful Victor. I felt like I was lying there smelling the night blooming jasmine and listening to the night time serenade. Made me long for Florida. Lovely. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/11/2021 11:35:00 AM
Very romantic Victor, quite a deep verse full of romantic imagery. Tom
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