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Dancing In the Moonlight

I lounged in silence,
Overwhelmed by beauty,
Invigorated and at peace
Beneath the graceful willow.

In this tranquil state
I felt and absorbed
The hazy waning shafts of moonlight
Interlaced with wafts of perfumes
Of the whitish flowers of the queen of the night,
The mighty selenicereus
That climbed the greenish trellis
Of my earthly paradise.

Every color of the darkening rose,
Every shade that hid the sleepy birds,
Every sound of cicadas that sang to the moon,
Every precious second that passed
Was but an undying serenade.

Oh that such a moment
Would never have an end.
For this was an eternal dance
Upon a fair land
Where nature led the band
With extreme serenity,
Directed with all unearthly charm
Life's infinite continuum.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Fowler Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 2:52 PM
Evocative writing Victory. Quite beautiful. :) Linda
Gilmour Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 3:59 AM
'sound of cicadas that sang to the moon' Wow Victor, such intoxicating words that bring your imagery to life in this wonderful poetry~ thank you my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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January 12, 2021 at 9:31 PM
WoW! Victor, You’ve penned such a wonderful piece with amazing content and imagery. Your descriptions paint such a lovely picture with words. Well done:-) Alexis
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January 12, 2021 at 6:40 AM
This is just gorgeous. Dancing in the moonlight. Beautiful imagery, Vic :)
Tor Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 9:35 PM
Exceptional and wonderful imagery Victor. A favorite for me my friend...
Crabtree Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 8:49 PM
A beautiful poem, Victor. Your words speak volumes. Wishing you a wonderful week :)
Buehler Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 7:26 PM
The moon and fragrant white flowers, and the phrase 'queen of the night,' make such exquisite imagery-I could go on and on! It's a Fave. :=)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 5:07 PM
Lovely, my friend!
Andresen Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 1:34 PM
- A beautiful picture ... with a romantic effect, Victor :) - Love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 12:50 PM
Enjoyed the dance of your beautiful verses, Victor. Excellent write from start to finish--I especially loved the third stanza.
Michael Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 11:53 AM
Nature sings her poetry...Well done.
Ball Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 11:45 AM
his is just so beautiful Victor. I felt like I was lying there smelling the night blooming jasmine and listening to the night time serenade. Made me long for Florida. Lovely. God Bless, JB
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January 11, 2021 at 11:35 AM
Very romantic Victor, quite a deep verse full of romantic imagery. Tom
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