Dancing Eunuchs of India

Dancing Eunuchs Of India
Eunuchs they were, who sang at doorsteps for alms
At birth and death alike; blessed the bride and groom too.
They danced their dark bodies heavily gyrating,with
 busted breasts, hairy chest and hefty forms tightly clad 
in saris candy colored ,sequined and six feet long.
Painted smiles, jingling bangles, tinkling anklets
sang bawdy ballads  of glorified virgins and stillborn children,
in a third gender voice-a hostile blend of two opposite sexes.


01/11/2013
Mehnaz Veetil
Entry for 8 lines contest on a native culture, sponsored by Debbie Guzzi 


Note: Most of the eunuchs in India live by begging. They normally come out in groups of about five to ten and spread out in streets approaching small shops and restaurants for alms. Normally people give them alms out of fear of being cursed. It is widely believed in India that the curse of a "hijra" is very effective; same with their blessings. They offer to dance at small family functions like naming ceremonies of newborn children, weddings and other village functions.
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Gauthier Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 9:20 AM
Colorful to say the least, Mini. It's nice to find this exotic poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology~
A  Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 5:59 PM
Hi, I like what I read, ~SKAT
Nair Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 6:57 PM
Mehnaz, It is such a fine write, I went thru it thrice. Thnx for your visit. !! Jag
Veetil Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 11:42 PM
thank you so much ...
A   Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 6:34 PM
Mehnaz, reading this one all over again. SOmetimes reading the same poem over and over.. makes it easier to understand ones poems. an interesting ending consequence.. enjoyed the dance... LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 5:00 PM
and I see this won a contest. BIG congrats.
Veetil Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 11:47 PM
thank you...
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 5:00 PM
I really enjoy this one. it's such a great description of these curious sounding people of India. what a colorful lot they must have been. Oh, I see you are writing of them in the present tense. they are still popular today? how interesting.
Veetil Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 11:46 PM
yes, they are ...they face social stigma...
Poet Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 6:56 PM
Very nice.Congrats on the win.So you are from India.
Veetil Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 12:10 AM
Haan, Kash. Mein Hindusthan se hoon ... Thanks for the visit.
A   Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 8:58 AM
Mehnaz, :-) Congratulations in Debbie's fine " EIGHT Lines any KIND " contest. enjoy your day... PD
Veetil Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 10:02 AM
Thank You,Linda...Nice to see you here
Cavanaugh Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 3:23 PM
I enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your win. And thank you for bringing to light more of the culture of India.
Veetil Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 10:03 AM
Thank You Jon...
Horne Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 2:43 PM
love this clever and very interesting write - congrats on all your wins : )
Veetil Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 10:05 AM
Thanks Jack...thank you for your kind words....
Guzzi Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 2:37 PM
A harsh culture that would still condon doing this to its children..Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Veetil Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 10:07 AM
Thank You Debbie for the HM in my contest....
Williams Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 10:59 AM
Mehnaz congrats on your HM...David
Veetil Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 10:08 AM
Thank you for stopping by...
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 4:32 AM
Congrats on your HM Mehnaz xx
Veetil Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 10:09 AM
Thank You Mandy...
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 1:41 AM
I am a bit familiar but this certainly breathes life into the story. Well written an impactful.
Veetil Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 10:13 AM
Thank You Richard, for stopping by... this third gender suffers a lot of social stigma ,pathetic ...
Roberts Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 8:36 PM
Another lesson learnt, thank you ....Seren
Veetil Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 10:13 AM
Thank You Seren for stopping by....
Horsman Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 2:15 PM
a brilliant poen for an excellent contest,, one can only learn from reading this...
Veetil Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 10:15 AM
Thanks Harry < I have always enjoyed your comments...
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