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Dancing Dewdrops

filtered through cotton-colored clouds golden rays of sunlight emerge trapping dancing-dewdrops in their beams brightening welcoming skies the meadow an artist's canvas June 10, 2021 Bite Size Poem no6 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 7/9/2021 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/10/2021 8:49:00 PM
Thank you for noticing my placement, Christuraj! :) gw
Date: 7/8/2021 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations! How beautiful is the picture painted in mind's eye of dancing dewdrops being trapped! BW ~ Mala
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/8/2021 5:27:00 PM
Thanks, Mala. Appreciate your kind, encouraging words. ~ Gershon
Date: 7/7/2021 3:59:00 PM
Gershon, how wonderful to find this "dancing-dewdrops" gem on the best new poems list! I loved it the first time I read it and have enjoyed it all over again! Congratulations! Sunlight and meadows!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/7/2021 5:57:00 PM
Thanks again, Sam. And congrats to you for having the #1 top best new poem on the list! Kudos, gw
Date: 7/4/2021 12:22:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Gershon! I could pictures it on my mind's camera!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/4/2021 5:39:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment, Smita. Light and Joy, Gershon
Date: 7/1/2021 11:48:00 AM
Your poem has such beautifully sparkling imagery Gershon! It's great !! Congratulations!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/4/2021 5:37:00 PM
Mike, your comment bubbles over with effervescence. Thank you! Happy Fourth of July! ~ Gershon
Date: 6/28/2021 7:26:00 AM
Lovely poem, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/4/2021 5:32:00 PM
Thank you for commenting, Ann. :) gw
Date: 6/25/2021 7:11:00 AM
Certainly a POTD!! Congrats, Gershon. A picture painted so beautifully.
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Date: 6/24/2021 11:31:00 AM
Lovely writing. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/25/2021 3:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gina! :)
Date: 6/15/2021 7:40:00 AM
Lovely...Congratulations Gershon Wolf on POTD.
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Date: 6/13/2021 12:35:00 PM
Congrats. on POTD Gershon, an honor which was greatly deserved with this wonderful gem of a poem. hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/13/2021 7:23:00 PM
Appreciate your visit and congrats, Jennifer. Best of everything, Gershon
Date: 6/13/2021 12:29:00 PM
Beautiful imagery. Congratulations on this well deserved win.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/13/2021 7:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for noticing, Nancy. Happy 'workweek' to you! :) gw
Date: 6/13/2021 11:29:00 AM
Hello Gershon, thi is a wonderful poem. Rain drops dancing is a wonderful scene. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 6/13/2021 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I can see your beautiful "Dancing Dewdrops." What a fun write. Enjoy your win with blessings.............
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Date: 6/13/2021 10:03:00 AM
What a beautiful canvas of images to gaze at, Gershon. Lovely snapshot of a morning meadow now held in time by your words. Congratulations on your win! So nice to see this on the winners list. Sunshine and summer light to you!
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Date: 6/13/2021 7:52:00 AM
Really Dancing. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/12/2021 7:13:00 PM
"Dewdrops dance through golden rays of sunlight" Such a beautiful image. It is a *Rain-bow*. God's promise. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. I am placing this in my favorites. Because. Congratulations Gershon, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:17:00 PM
Faves are always a privilege and a treat for me. I thank you, Brandy, especially. Sweetness and Light, Gershon
Date: 6/12/2021 5:19:00 PM
Gershon, lovely and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor, peace _Constance
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:18:00 PM
Appreciate your visit and lovely comment, Constance. Best always, Gershon
Date: 6/12/2021 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations Gershon on POTD honors. Especially if the artist's name is Gershon:) Your well chosen words paint a very vivid picture.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:19:00 PM
Ha, ha! You should know, Daniel, that a 'masterpiece' for me would be a 'stick-figure' that is not crooked. Just call me a chip off the old Picasso. Thanks for noticing my POTD. Best always, gw
Date: 6/12/2021 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations, Gershon, on your POTD. What an amazing expression "trapping dancing-dewdrops in their beams"! How much said in few lines! Best wishes ~ Mala
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Mala. All the best to you this weekend, gw
Date: 6/12/2021 1:09:00 PM
Definitely a well deserved choice on POTD and a most superbly crafted free verse poem my friend. Congratulations on this new creation being honored. A fav- and a beauty. God bless.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:21:00 PM
Thank you for the FAVE, especially, Robert. It's always an honor for me when a fellow poet FAVEs one of my writes. Appreciated! Peace and Tranquility, Gershon
Date: 6/12/2021 12:55:00 PM
Your words have painted that canvas with lovely images, Gershon! Congrats on POTD! Blessings, Kim M
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:22:00 PM
Thank you for such a sweet comment, Kim. Happy weekend. ~ Tranquility, Gershon
Date: 6/12/2021 12:25:00 PM
Congrats Gershon! Great bite-sized poem! It's refreshing like an after dinner mint!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:22:00 PM
Ha, ha! Love your comment, Jennifer. All that's missing is the toothpick now. (I like them with a red or green ribbon bit). Cheers, Gershon
Date: 6/12/2021 11:37:00 AM
Back to offer my heartiest congratulations, Gershon, on your POTD. I told you it was a winner! LOL
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/12/2021 9:17:00 PM
Well, frankly, I wouldn't count on it. Always keep in mind that we can't have our cake and eat it, too. Now, where did I get that from???? Have a terrific weekend, gw.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:23:00 PM
You called it, Milt! Thanks! Uh, what are the odds on inflation cooling down by the end of the year, speaking of important things... Thanks again, gw
Date: 6/12/2021 11:27:00 AM
Lovely image of a summer's day..... from cotton coloured clouds to a meadow waiting for an artist's canvas..lovely.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:24:00 PM
Appreciate your lovely comment, Delice. Happy weekend, Gershon
Date: 6/12/2021 11:07:00 AM
Love the expression dancing-dewdrops, every line you’ve written too. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:24:00 PM
Thank you for the 'vintage rhyming' B.B. comment, my friend. Happiness always, Gershon
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