Gershon Wolf Poet Free verse

Dancing Dewdrops

filtered through cotton-colored clouds
  golden rays of sunlight emerge
trapping dancing-dewdrops in their beams
  brightening welcoming skies
    the meadow an artist's canvas


       
                  June 10, 2021
     Bite Size Poem no6 Poetry Contest
              Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Christuraj Alex July 9, 2021 at 7:06 AM Congratulations on your placement. Gershon Wolf July 10, 2021 at 8:49 PM Thank you for noticing my placement, Christuraj! :) gw

Malabika Ray Choudhury July 8, 2021 at 2:58 PM Congratulations! How beautiful is the picture painted in mind's eye of dancing dewdrops being trapped! BW ~ Mala Gershon Wolf July 8, 2021 at 5:27 PM Thanks, Mala. Appreciate your kind, encouraging words. ~ Gershon

Sam Kauffman July 7, 2021 at 3:59 PM Gershon, how wonderful to find this "dancing-dewdrops" gem on the best new poems list! I loved it the first time I read it and have enjoyed it all over again! Congratulations! Sunlight and meadows! Gershon Wolf July 7, 2021 at 5:57 PM Thanks again, Sam. And congrats to you for having the #1 top best new poem on the list! Kudos, gw

Smita Kulkarni July 4, 2021 at 12:22 PM Beautiful imagery Gershon! I could pictures it on my mind's camera!! Gershon Wolf July 4, 2021 at 5:39 PM Thank you for your lovely comment, Smita. Light and Joy, Gershon

Mike Gentile July 1, 2021 at 11:48 AM Your poem has such beautifully sparkling imagery Gershon! It's great !! Congratulations! Gershon Wolf July 4, 2021 at 5:37 PM Mike, your comment bubbles over with effervescence. Thank you! Happy Fourth of July! ~ Gershon

Ann Peck June 28, 2021 at 7:26 AM Lovely poem, Gershon. Gershon Wolf July 4, 2021 at 5:32 PM Thank you for commenting, Ann. :) gw

Regina Mcintosh June 24, 2021 at 11:31 AM Lovely writing. God bless you always, Love, Gina Gershon Wolf June 25, 2021 at 3:54 PM Thank you so much, Gina! :)

Arturo Michael June 15, 2021 at 7:40 AM Lovely...Congratulations Gershon Wolf on POTD.

Jennifer Proxenos June 13, 2021 at 12:35 PM Congrats. on POTD Gershon, an honor which was greatly deserved with this wonderful gem of a poem. hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Gershon Wolf June 13, 2021 at 7:23 PM Appreciate your visit and congrats, Jennifer. Best of everything, Gershon

Nancy Kaufman June 13, 2021 at 12:29 PM Beautiful imagery. Congratulations on this well deserved win. Gershon Wolf June 13, 2021 at 7:24 PM Thank you so much for noticing, Nancy. Happy 'workweek' to you! :) gw

Darlene De Beaulieu June 13, 2021 at 11:29 AM Hello Gershon, thi is a wonderful poem. Rain drops dancing is a wonderful scene. Enjoy your day my friend.

Paula Goldsmith June 13, 2021 at 10:12 AM Congratulations on your win. I can see your beautiful "Dancing Dewdrops." What a fun write. Enjoy your win with blessings.............

Sam Kauffman June 13, 2021 at 10:03 AM What a beautiful canvas of images to gaze at, Gershon. Lovely snapshot of a morning meadow now held in time by your words. Congratulations on your win! So nice to see this on the winners list. Sunshine and summer light to you!

Christuraj Alex June 13, 2021 at 7:52 AM Really Dancing. Congratulations!

Brandy Nicole June 12, 2021 at 7:13 PM "Dewdrops dance through golden rays of sunlight" Such a beautiful image. It is a *Rain-bow*. God's promise. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. I am placing this in my favorites. Because. Congratulations Gershon, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Gershon Wolf June 12, 2021 at 8:17 PM Faves are always a privilege and a treat for me. I thank you, Brandy, especially. Sweetness and Light, Gershon

Constance La France June 12, 2021 at 5:19 PM Gershon, lovely and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor, peace _Constance Gershon Wolf June 12, 2021 at 8:18 PM Appreciate your visit and lovely comment, Constance. Best always, Gershon

Daniel Turner June 12, 2021 at 3:08 PM Congratulations Gershon on POTD honors. Especially if the artist's name is Gershon:) Your well chosen words paint a very vivid picture. Gershon Wolf June 12, 2021 at 8:19 PM Ha, ha! You should know, Daniel, that a 'masterpiece' for me would be a 'stick-figure' that is not crooked. Just call me a chip off the old Picasso. Thanks for noticing my POTD. Best always, gw

Malabika Ray Choudhury June 12, 2021 at 1:15 PM Congratulations, Gershon, on your POTD. What an amazing expression "trapping dancing-dewdrops in their beams"! How much said in few lines! Best wishes ~ Mala Gershon Wolf June 12, 2021 at 8:20 PM Thank you so much, Mala. All the best to you this weekend, gw

Robert Lindley June 12, 2021 at 1:09 PM Definitely a well deserved choice on POTD and a most superbly crafted free verse poem my friend. Congratulations on this new creation being honored. A fav- and a beauty. God bless. Gershon Wolf June 12, 2021 at 8:21 PM Thank you for the FAVE, especially, Robert. It's always an honor for me when a fellow poet FAVEs one of my writes. Appreciated! Peace and Tranquility, Gershon

Kim Merryman June 12, 2021 at 12:55 PM Your words have painted that canvas with lovely images, Gershon! Congrats on POTD! Blessings, Kim M Gershon Wolf June 12, 2021 at 8:22 PM Thank you for such a sweet comment, Kim. Happy weekend. ~ Tranquility, Gershon

Jennifer Fenn June 12, 2021 at 12:25 PM Congrats Gershon! Great bite-sized poem! It's refreshing like an after dinner mint! Gershon Wolf June 12, 2021 at 8:22 PM Ha, ha! Love your comment, Jennifer. All that's missing is the toothpick now. (I like them with a red or green ribbon bit). Cheers, Gershon

L Milton Hankins June 12, 2021 at 11:37 AM Back to offer my heartiest congratulations, Gershon, on your POTD. I told you it was a winner! LOL L Milton Hankins June 12, 2021 at 9:17 PM Well, frankly, I wouldn't count on it. Always keep in mind that we can't have our cake and eat it, too. Now, where did I get that from???? Have a terrific weekend, gw. Gershon Wolf June 12, 2021 at 8:23 PM You called it, Milt! Thanks! Uh, what are the odds on inflation cooling down by the end of the year, speaking of important things... Thanks again, gw

Delice Arleen Skelly June 12, 2021 at 11:27 AM Lovely image of a summer's day..... from cotton coloured clouds to a meadow waiting for an artist's canvas..lovely. Gershon Wolf June 12, 2021 at 8:24 PM Appreciate your lovely comment, Delice. Happy weekend, Gershon

Beryl Edmonds June 12, 2021 at 11:07 AM Love the expression dancing-dewdrops, every line you’ve written too. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle Gershon Wolf June 12, 2021 at 8:24 PM Thank you for the 'vintage rhyming' B.B. comment, my friend. Happiness always, Gershon

Ken Rone June 12, 2021 at 9:58 AM One of you best Gershon. It brought a tear. Such imigary! POTD and beyond. -Ken Gershon Wolf June 12, 2021 at 8:26 PM Thank you so much for noticing, Ken. Happy weekend to you, Gershon

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