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Dancing Dewdrops

filtered through cotton-colored clouds golden rays of sunlight emerge trapping dancing-dewdrops in their beams brightening welcoming skies the meadow an artist's canvas June 10, 2021 Bite Size Poem no6 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/9/2021 7:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/10/2021 8:49:00 PM

Thank you for noticing my placement, Christuraj! :) gw

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/8/2021 2:58:00 PM

Congratulations! How beautiful is the picture painted in mind's eye of dancing dewdrops being trapped! BW ~ Mala

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/8/2021 5:27:00 PM

Thanks, Mala. Appreciate your kind, encouraging words. ~ Gershon

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/7/2021 3:59:00 PM

Gershon, how wonderful to find this "dancing-dewdrops" gem on the best new poems list! I loved it the first time I read it and have enjoyed it all over again! Congratulations! Sunlight and meadows!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/7/2021 5:57:00 PM

Thanks again, Sam. And congrats to you for having the #1 top best new poem on the list! Kudos, gw

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 7/4/2021 12:22:00 PM

Beautiful imagery Gershon! I could pictures it on my mind's camera!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/4/2021 5:39:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely comment, Smita. Light and Joy, Gershon

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/1/2021 11:48:00 AM

Your poem has such beautifully sparkling imagery Gershon! It's great !! Congratulations!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/4/2021 5:37:00 PM

Mike, your comment bubbles over with effervescence. Thank you! Happy Fourth of July! ~ Gershon

Ann Peck

Date: 6/28/2021 7:26:00 AM

Lovely poem, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/4/2021 5:32:00 PM

Thank you for commenting, Ann. :) gw

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 6/25/2021 7:11:00 AM

Certainly a POTD!! Congrats, Gershon. A picture painted so beautifully.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/24/2021 11:31:00 AM

Lovely writing. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/25/2021 3:54:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gina! :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/15/2021 7:40:00 AM

Lovely...Congratulations Gershon Wolf on POTD.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/13/2021 12:35:00 PM

Congrats. on POTD Gershon, an honor which was greatly deserved with this wonderful gem of a poem. hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/13/2021 7:23:00 PM

Appreciate your visit and congrats, Jennifer. Best of everything, Gershon

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 6/13/2021 12:29:00 PM

Beautiful imagery. Congratulations on this well deserved win.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/13/2021 7:24:00 PM

Thank you so much for noticing, Nancy. Happy 'workweek' to you! :) gw

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/13/2021 11:29:00 AM

Hello Gershon, thi is a wonderful poem. Rain drops dancing is a wonderful scene. Enjoy your day my friend.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/13/2021 10:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I can see your beautiful "Dancing Dewdrops." What a fun write. Enjoy your win with blessings.............

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/13/2021 10:03:00 AM

What a beautiful canvas of images to gaze at, Gershon. Lovely snapshot of a morning meadow now held in time by your words. Congratulations on your win! So nice to see this on the winners list. Sunshine and summer light to you!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/13/2021 7:52:00 AM

Really Dancing. Congratulations!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/12/2021 7:13:00 PM

"Dewdrops dance through golden rays of sunlight" Such a beautiful image. It is a *Rain-bow*. God's promise. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. I am placing this in my favorites. Because. Congratulations Gershon, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:17:00 PM

Faves are always a privilege and a treat for me. I thank you, Brandy, especially. Sweetness and Light, Gershon

Constance La France

Date: 6/12/2021 5:19:00 PM

Gershon, lovely and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor, peace _Constance

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:18:00 PM

Appreciate your visit and lovely comment, Constance. Best always, Gershon

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/12/2021 3:08:00 PM

Congratulations Gershon on POTD honors. Especially if the artist's name is Gershon:) Your well chosen words paint a very vivid picture.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:19:00 PM

Ha, ha! You should know, Daniel, that a 'masterpiece' for me would be a 'stick-figure' that is not crooked. Just call me a chip off the old Picasso. Thanks for noticing my POTD. Best always, gw

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 6/12/2021 1:15:00 PM

Congratulations, Gershon, on your POTD. What an amazing expression "trapping dancing-dewdrops in their beams"! How much said in few lines! Best wishes ~ Mala

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:20:00 PM

Thank you so much, Mala. All the best to you this weekend, gw

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/12/2021 1:09:00 PM

Definitely a well deserved choice on POTD and a most superbly crafted free verse poem my friend. Congratulations on this new creation being honored. A fav- and a beauty. God bless.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:21:00 PM

Thank you for the FAVE, especially, Robert. It's always an honor for me when a fellow poet FAVEs one of my writes. Appreciated! Peace and Tranquility, Gershon

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/12/2021 12:55:00 PM

Your words have painted that canvas with lovely images, Gershon! Congrats on POTD! Blessings, Kim M

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:22:00 PM

Thank you for such a sweet comment, Kim. Happy weekend. ~ Tranquility, Gershon

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 6/12/2021 12:25:00 PM

Congrats Gershon! Great bite-sized poem! It's refreshing like an after dinner mint!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:22:00 PM

Ha, ha! Love your comment, Jennifer. All that's missing is the toothpick now. (I like them with a red or green ribbon bit). Cheers, Gershon

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/12/2021 11:37:00 AM

Back to offer my heartiest congratulations, Gershon, on your POTD. I told you it was a winner! LOL

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/12/2021 9:17:00 PM

Well, frankly, I wouldn't count on it. Always keep in mind that we can't have our cake and eat it, too. Now, where did I get that from???? Have a terrific weekend, gw.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:23:00 PM

You called it, Milt! Thanks! Uh, what are the odds on inflation cooling down by the end of the year, speaking of important things... Thanks again, gw

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 6/12/2021 11:27:00 AM

Lovely image of a summer's day..... from cotton coloured clouds to a meadow waiting for an artist's canvas..lovely.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:24:00 PM

Appreciate your lovely comment, Delice. Happy weekend, Gershon

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/12/2021 11:07:00 AM

Love the expression dancing-dewdrops, every line you’ve written too. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/12/2021 8:24:00 PM

Thank you for the 'vintage rhyming' B.B. comment, my friend. Happiness always, Gershon