Dancing Faeries - the Monorhyme Style

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~Dancing Faeries~ ( Monorhyme poem) As I see the land on the prarie I'm here just sneaking on faerie They all swirl and dance so merry til they see a troll thats really scary Then they all soar and hide with Carey He'll cover them and be very wary Meanwhile the rest waltz with Dery Til' the faerie Queen arrives with Gery She smiles and partakes sweet cherry And forest fills of mirth and cheerie As the faerie Queen dances also with Barry And gracefully spins and swirls so airy. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2010 October.25.2016

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David Meade

Date: 10/25/2016 8:48:00 PM

I love the feel and grace that this poem portrays. You do these so well -- makes me want to jump right into your words and play. Love generously.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/28/2016 2:20:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly David, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 10/25/2016 4:35:00 PM

Well-done very interesting great poem x

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/28/2016 2:21:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Wendy, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D