Dancing

Yellow butterflies Dancing close to each other Inbetween flowers

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John Posey

Date: 10/29/2013 3:17:00 AM

Did ya get the name of them pills..... or does it matter?.... ROFL..... Jake

John Posey

Date: 10/29/2013 3:01:00 AM

classic and textbook haiku..... I grew to like this form of poetry...... Well done, Sara.... Jake

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/21/2009 7:03:00 PM

sweet! Sara! jim

Abraham L

Date: 8/16/2009 6:44:00 AM

This in itself is a sight to behold, very nice poem. thanks again for your feed back. You have mail

James Fraser

Date: 8/12/2009 11:07:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku Sara, butterflies in poems = Awesome>>James

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/12/2009 7:16:00 AM

Thank you Sara for your thoughtful comment. This is absolutely light and breezy and creates such a beautiful day imagery. So lovely. Love, Shar xoxo

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/12/2009 5:01:00 AM

This is beautiful. Butterflies are so delightful. I really enjoyed this haiku. Thanks for your comments on my poems, too. Love, DAS-J

Isaac White

Date: 8/11/2009 6:08:00 PM

well thank you for the comment i hope you liked my poem

Jen H.

Date: 8/11/2009 5:55:00 PM

Brilliant picture captured! Great haiku Sara! ~Jen~

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/11/2009 5:14:00 PM

You used the 5 7 5 form to good effect. Hope you and yours are happy and healthy. Yours Matthew Anish

James Knox

Date: 8/11/2009 4:48:00 PM

this is beautiful , great imagery :)