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This girl, me- d r e a m s of being a dancer, to leap and dip, to spin fast and- f a s t e r; On stage- others went one way- my feet stuck- as though in clay; This girl, me - m o r t i f i e d - sure no Prancer. _________________________ July 9, 2016 Limerick For the contest, My Most Embarrassing Moment sponsor, Cindi Rockwell Fifth Place

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Date: 7/27/2016 4:38:00 PM
Congrats B.O.to win on nice cute poem
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Date: 7/26/2016 7:39:00 AM
Your piece has sailed me to a light moment... Congrats BW, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/25/2016 8:14:00 PM
ahahaha! congrats Broken Wings :)-luloo
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Date: 7/25/2016 4:25:00 PM
Very sweet but embarrassing Limerick, Broken Wings...that would be mortifying! Congratulations on your nice win. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/25/2016 2:17:00 PM
great limerick BW - I am sure you are a very graceful dancer really - stage fright must have got the better of you on the day:-( congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/25/2016 1:55:00 PM
Dancing on stage is not for all.Its a lovely poem BW,congratulations!
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Date: 7/25/2016 1:24:00 AM
Good Limerick Constance. Loved it. Hugs.
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Date: 7/10/2016 4:25:00 PM
could picture this, my friend. I truly can't dance a single step! hope you & the kitties are well - have this week off work x
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