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Dance With the Snowflakes

Come dance with me and the snowflakes
They’re falling now, but they won’t last long
Come give me a smile 
and let’s laugh for a while
They’re playing our favorite song

                 * * * * *

Come whisper to me about snowflakes
how for a moment they were pure lace
and the sheer delight 
we felt on that night
as they melted when they touched our face

                * * * * *

Remember me when the snowflakes
come swirling on crisp winter wind
and promise me this
that you’ll know the bliss
of dancing with snowflakes again



12/4/2021

Contest: Winter Wishes
Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/23/2021 12:10:00 PM

I really love the emotional feeling this wonderful poem expresses P.S. Especially your ending. A poet’s poem! A Fave for me. Blessings this Christmas. xxoo

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/23/2021 11:50:00 PM

Thank you so much Connie for your kind words of encouragement and for the fave! Blessings to you, as well :) -ps

Ann Peck

Date: 12/19/2021 8:38:00 AM

"dancing with snowflakes"~I love that! You poem is beautiful.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/19/2021 8:49:00 AM

thank you :) ~ps

Jack Horne

Date: 12/17/2021 1:28:00 PM

aww, this is really lovely

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/17/2021 1:49:00 PM

thank you, Jack. You are too kind :) ~ps

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/15/2021 12:31:00 PM

So happy to see the gem on the winners list PS! Congratulations and kudos. This is wonderfully written and literally "dances" with romantic memories! All the best.!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/15/2021 12:32:00 PM

Thank you so much Sam! -ps

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 12/15/2021 5:55:00 AM

Expressive piece so well-written, P.S. Love the theme of snowflakes and the quiet joy and contentment they symbolize. Congratulations!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/15/2021 6:37:00 AM

Thank you very much :) ps

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/15/2021 1:11:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. A blessed Christmas to you and your family. God bless you.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/15/2021 6:37:00 AM

Hi Beata! Thank you :) -ps

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/14/2021 10:36:00 PM

Very beautiful poem inviting everyone to enjoy the season blissfully. Congratulations!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/15/2021 6:36:00 AM

Thank you :) -ps

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/14/2021 8:41:00 PM

Ah, P.S., I am ever enchanted by the tender charms of your exquisite, lyrical, musical poem. Your inspiring imagery swirls me up and around in a dance with the snowflakes. Rich, beautiful poetry, tinged with reminiscences and sadness; “remember me when..” Congratulations for your excellent win in Chantelle’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/14/2021 8:49:00 PM

Susan You are the poet’s poet! You use your words to spread beauty everywhere! Thank you for your encouragement and inspiration :) -ps

Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2021 3:50:00 PM

what a charming poem and I love the title PS, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/14/2021 5:54:00 PM

thank you Jan :) ~ps

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2021 3:46:00 PM

I just love this one. It's so charming. Congrats.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/14/2021 5:55:00 PM

Andrea, thank you so much. Always good to have your input. I am so glad you like this one. :) ~ps

Constance La France

Date: 12/14/2021 1:13:00 PM

PS, this is a lovely poem and as a Winter child I love to dance with the snowflakes. Congratulations on your win in Chantelle's Winter Wishes contest ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/14/2021 1:28:00 PM

Thank you, Constance! -ps

Valsa George

Date: 12/13/2021 5:18:00 PM

The powdery touch of snow on the face is exhilarating ! If you have your dear with you to dance, when the snowflakes fall, it will be lovelier... ! The experience is made so enjoyable. Thanks Awtry !

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/13/2021 5:19:00 PM

Valsa, what a poetic comment! Thank you so much for your visit :) ~ps

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/7/2021 10:01:00 PM

So lovely P.S.! Beautful lyrical quality that carry your imagery gentle as falling snow. Best wishes for the contest! All the best!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/8/2021 12:03:00 AM

thank you so much Sam :) ~ps