Dance With Me

I want to take your hand
And dance with you, on the silver sand
To Nature’s beat and the rhythm of the sea

I want to watch you sway
To the pulsating sounds of club deejay
Lost in the music with your hair flying free

I want to see you dance inside
Mesmerised, as the dancers glide
Across the stage to Prokofiev or Tchaikovsky

I want to take you to our bed
And dance to the music in your head
Lost in the ballet, swaying free
Liquid motion, like the sea
Pulsating to nature’s sensual beat
Glistening in the flames of our passionate heat

Come dance with me…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 4/7/2012 2:06:00 AM
Smile ˜ My Beautiful Babies * Love Always, John!:) ˜
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Date: 12/8/2008 9:38:00 AM
Wow... I'm speechless.. it's wonderful!
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Date: 12/1/2008 12:55:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Very sensual.
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Date: 12/1/2008 8:05:00 AM
Can't really say no to such an invite. I like- I want to see you dance inside and ...and dance to the music in your head
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Date: 11/29/2008 6:43:00 AM
Very poignant with great rythm and imagery.The poem flows painting a vivid picture of music and movement. Excellent work, just beautiful.
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Date: 11/28/2008 2:03:00 PM
Loved the title. Loved the mood and feeling. Hey, I loved this poem. Carefree and sexually moody - inviting and daydreaming(ly) beautiful to inhale...verses that lift romance to it's apex! Wishing you and your loved ones Happy Holidays. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/27/2008 3:21:00 PM
Whoever she is, she is very lucky. This is so romantic....Actually I'm speechless. Last stanza ignited the real flame:) Lovely....Love, Chitra
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Date: 11/27/2008 9:50:00 AM
A very beautiful poem of romantic tones.....Love the ending. Best wishes, Sara:)
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Date: 11/27/2008 7:46:00 AM
Like the kyrielle flavour to this one Nigel and that phrase 'Liquid motion, like the sea 'Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 11/27/2008 7:10:00 AM
Nigel your passionate side is showing. This piece is for a special woman. Nice write. Michael
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Date: 11/27/2008 6:58:00 AM
Nigel,this may be my favorite ..nature surely does have a sensual beat..every line here is heavenly. You must have had women swooning around you all your life if you/ve been writing like this. BG
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Date: 11/27/2008 6:32:00 AM
Nice love poem. Really enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 11/27/2008 5:36:00 AM
Well my friend you have written a very romantic piece of poetry filled with love and romance. Liquid motion like the sea is my favourite line. This work flows so well and the participants in the poem are very clear to see. Love, Chris.
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Date: 11/27/2008 3:59:00 AM
I love the whole dancing theme. Great rhyme and rhythm. You really are a very passionate soul Nigel. Great write. Love Robin
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Date: 11/27/2008 3:29:00 AM
had to read a little to get the mood going as far writing huh? great poem and i really enjoyed it alot.
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