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Dance With Me

I want to take your hand And dance with you, on the silver sand To Nature’s beat and the rhythm of the sea I want to watch you sway To the pulsating sounds of club deejay Lost in the music with your hair flying free I want to see you dance inside Mesmerised, as the dancers glide Across the stage to Prokofiev or Tchaikovsky I want to take you to our bed And dance to the music in your head Lost in the ballet, swaying free Liquid motion, like the sea Pulsating to nature’s sensual beat Glistening in the flames of our passionate heat Come dance with me…

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John Rhinem

Date: 4/7/2012 2:06:00 AM

Smile ˜ My Beautiful Babies * Love Always, John!:) ˜

Serenity D'Nae Montgomery

Date: 12/8/2008 9:38:00 AM

Wow... I'm speechless.. it's wonderful!

Alina Vitali

Date: 12/1/2008 12:55:00 PM

Beautiful poem. Very sensual.

Ciss G

Date: 12/1/2008 8:05:00 AM

Can't really say no to such an invite. I like- I want to see you dance inside and ...and dance to the music in your head

Margaret Okubo

Date: 11/29/2008 6:43:00 AM

Very poignant with great rythm and imagery.The poem flows painting a vivid picture of music and movement. Excellent work, just beautiful.

John Heck

Date: 11/28/2008 2:03:00 PM

Loved the title. Loved the mood and feeling. Hey, I loved this poem. Carefree and sexually moody - inviting and daydreaming(ly) beautiful to inhale...verses that lift romance to it's apex! Wishing you and your loved ones Happy Holidays. Peace always, John

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 11/27/2008 3:21:00 PM

Whoever she is, she is very lucky. This is so romantic....Actually I'm speechless. Last stanza ignited the real flame:) Lovely....Love, Chitra

Sara Lokken

Date: 11/27/2008 9:50:00 AM

A very beautiful poem of romantic tones.....Love the ending. Best wishes, Sara:)

Brian Strand

Date: 11/27/2008 7:46:00 AM

Like the kyrielle flavour to this one Nigel and that phrase 'Liquid motion, like the sea 'Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Michael Torres

Date: 11/27/2008 7:10:00 AM

Nigel your passionate side is showing. This piece is for a special woman. Nice write. Michael

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/27/2008 6:58:00 AM

Nigel,this may be my favorite ..nature surely does have a sensual beat..every line here is heavenly. You must have had women swooning around you all your life if you/ve been writing like this. BG

Robert Allison

Date: 11/27/2008 6:32:00 AM

Nice love poem. Really enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 11/27/2008 5:36:00 AM

Well my friend you have written a very romantic piece of poetry filled with love and romance. Liquid motion like the sea is my favourite line. This work flows so well and the participants in the poem are very clear to see. Love, Chris.

Robin L. Gass

Date: 11/27/2008 3:59:00 AM

I love the whole dancing theme. Great rhyme and rhythm. You really are a very passionate soul Nigel. Great write. Love Robin

Derrick Burton

Date: 11/27/2008 3:29:00 AM

had to read a little to get the mood going as far writing huh? great poem and i really enjoyed it alot.