Kim Merryman | + Follow Poet |
Verse | + Fav Poem | Comment | Email | Print |

Dance of the Snowflakes - a Waltz Wave

Dance
snowflakes
dance
from your 
icy home
above.
Each
twirl, each
swirl, ballet
perfect as you
pirouette 
your way
down
to the
frozen ground,
where you
take
your last
bow.

11/17/15

Please Login to post a comment

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 11/21/2015 3:58:00 PM Fogot to mention I am fav'ing this beauty my friend! Hugs, Connie Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 11/24/2015 5:32:00 PM Wow! I'm honored, Connie!

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 11/21/2015 3:56:00 PM Wow Kim! This is a top winner for me. Comparing snowfall to ballet is brilliant! I loved it! I also loved the form you chose. It displayed your words superbly. Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 11/24/2015 5:30:00 PM Thank you for encouraging words, Connie!I'm so glad you liked it!

Lin Lane Date: 11/21/2015 4:05:00 AM That's a lovely concept, Kim. Congratulations. Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 11/24/2015 5:29:00 PM Thank you, Lin!

Jan Allison Date: 11/21/2015 3:47:00 AM Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 11/24/2015 5:29:00 PM Thanks, Jan!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 11/21/2015 12:02:00 AM How lovely Kim.. congrats on awesome first place win! Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 11/24/2015 5:28:00 PM Thank you, Upma!

Skat A Date: 11/20/2015 8:00:00 PM Kim, Congratulations on your Snow Win. SKAT Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 11/19/2015 2:23:00 PM Oh my, this is great..A winner for sure. BG Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 11/24/2015 5:27:00 PM Thank you, Barbara! So glad you liked it!

Njeri Hunjeri Date: 11/18/2015 12:46:00 PM Wow, very beautiful. i like a lot Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 11/24/2015 5:26:00 PM Thank you Njeri! I'm glad you liked it!

Skat A Date: 11/18/2015 12:31:00 PM awesome. SKAT Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 11/22/2015 9:54:00 PM Thank you, SKAT!

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 11/18/2015 8:15:00 AM Next dance, please? Thank you! Phantasmagoric, dear Kim. A seven! Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 11/22/2015 9:53:00 PM I appreciate your encouraging comments, Demetrios! Thank you!

Ilene Bauer Date: 11/17/2015 4:54:00 PM i love the whole dance analogy, kim! you've done a fine job with this one... Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 11/22/2015 9:52:00 PM Thank you, Ilene! I'm glad you liked it.

Lin Lane Date: 11/17/2015 4:28:00 PM This is so charming. Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 11/22/2015 9:51:00 PM Thank you, Lin!

Jan Allison Date: 11/17/2015 3:29:00 PM Delightful Kim - I am so glad you introduced this form to us:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 11/22/2015 9:50:00 PM Thank you, Jan!

Jill Spagnola Date: 11/17/2015 3:05:00 PM and each as unique as your pen Kim! Delicate and beautiful, best of luck....:), jill Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 11/22/2015 9:49:00 PM Thank you for your sweet comment, Jill!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/17/2015 2:55:00 PM - Beautiful, Kim - (luckily we do not have snow yet) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 11/22/2015 9:48:00 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise!