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Dance of the Daisies

I Just want To be where The daisies grow Swaying in soft breeze A dance of the daisies One thousand happy faces Spreading smiles all around to grow I want to be one of them to know My perception will become what I show Heidi Sands 2/12/22

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/14/2022 7:31:00 PM

Hello Heidi ... enjoying to read this poetic genre, and the verse is uplifting with colour and smiles - thank you Heidi - Lindsay

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/15/2022 6:07:00 AM

Thank you Lindsay. I am happy you enjoy it! I hope you have a nice day :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/13/2022 6:09:00 AM

To perceive and show beauty to the world is a a very worthy aspiration Heidi and is akin to writing. You have definitely succeeded here with this wonderful poem which is a joy to read! Happy Sunday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2022 6:30:00 AM

Thank you so much Mike. Your kind feedback is always appreciated! Happy Sunday :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/13/2022 3:06:00 AM

They do indeed look like little smiling faces, well said! And great message, "I want to be one of them to know My perception will become what I show" For sure, what we think and feel becomes a physical reality for ourselves as well as others. Joe.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2022 5:32:00 AM

Thank you for your understanding feedback Joe. I hope you have a nice day :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/12/2022 10:47:00 PM

Wonderful crafted poetry.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2022 5:31:00 AM

Thank you Harry. I hope you have a nice day :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/12/2022 7:52:00 PM

May your wish be granted, Heidi! ~ The Blue Fairy

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2022 5:31:00 AM

Thank you Gershon :) I hope all is well !

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/12/2022 1:44:00 PM

Heidi, I would love to be in the middle of the daisies right know. Nicely written. Blessings ~ Debra

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2022 2:01:00 PM

Me too! Thank you Debra. Blessings :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 2/12/2022 1:18:00 PM

Just beautiful, Heidi:-) I really enjoyed this etheree of yours! Blessings, xoxo

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2022 1:23:00 PM

Thank you Edward. I am happy you enjoyed it. Blessings :)

Karen Croft

Date: 2/12/2022 1:17:00 PM

love this!!!

Karen Croft
Date: 2/12/2022 5:32:00 PM

You're welcome!

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2022 1:22:00 PM

Thank you Karen :)

Robert Gorelick

Date: 2/12/2022 12:44:00 PM

Soft, mellow, delightful. Thank you for visiting Heidi. Robert

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2022 1:22:00 PM

Thank you Robert :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/12/2022 10:14:00 AM

A lovely image of warm summer days and the daisies swaying in the warm breeze. Cant come quick enough. Hope your weekend is going well Heidi. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2022 10:17:00 AM

Thank you Tom. You are right! It can't come quick enough. We have milder temp today, but still a couple feet of snow on the ground and back to the cold tomorrow. I hope you are having a nice weekend. I always appreciate your comments :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/12/2022 5:29:00 AM

I see them swaying and dancing. Much joy you witnessed in thousand happy faces, Heidi. Apt description brings forth the smiling imagery.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2022 5:39:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. I am happy to see your kind comment. I hope you have a nice day :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/12/2022 5:26:00 AM

Nicely penned, Heidi, deep and touching poem. I loved the two following lines: Spreading smiles all around to grow I want to be one of them to know Best regards

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2022 5:38:00 AM

Thank you Lasaad. I always appreciate your kind feedback :)