Heidi Sands Poet Etheree

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Heidi Sands

2/12/22

Dance of the Daisies

I 
Just want
To be where
The daisies grow
Swaying in soft breeze
A dance of the daisies
One thousand happy faces
Spreading smiles all around to grow
I want to be one of them to know
My perception will become what I show

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Lindsay Laurie February 14, 2022 at 7:31 PM Hello Heidi ... enjoying to read this poetic genre, and the verse is uplifting with colour and smiles - thank you Heidi - Lindsay Heidi Sands February 15, 2022 at 6:07 AM Thank you Lindsay. I am happy you enjoy it! I hope you have a nice day :)

Mike Gentile February 13, 2022 at 6:09 AM To perceive and show beauty to the world is a a very worthy aspiration Heidi and is akin to writing. You have definitely succeeded here with this wonderful poem which is a joy to read! Happy Sunday xxoo Heidi Sands February 13, 2022 at 6:30 AM Thank you so much Mike. Your kind feedback is always appreciated! Happy Sunday :)

Joseph P. DiMino February 13, 2022 at 3:06 AM They do indeed look like little smiling faces, well said! And great message, "I want to be one of them to know My perception will become what I show" For sure, what we think and feel becomes a physical reality for ourselves as well as others. Joe. Heidi Sands February 13, 2022 at 5:32 AM Thank you for your understanding feedback Joe. I hope you have a nice day :)

Harry Horsman February 12, 2022 at 10:47 PM Wonderful crafted poetry. Heidi Sands February 13, 2022 at 5:31 AM Thank you Harry. I hope you have a nice day :)

Gershon Wolf February 12, 2022 at 7:52 PM May your wish be granted, Heidi! ~ The Blue Fairy Heidi Sands February 13, 2022 at 5:31 AM Thank you Gershon :) I hope all is well !

Debra L Brown February 12, 2022 at 1:44 PM Heidi, I would love to be in the middle of the daisies right know. Nicely written. Blessings ~ Debra Heidi Sands February 12, 2022 at 2:01 PM Me too! Thank you Debra. Blessings :)

Edward Ibeh February 12, 2022 at 1:18 PM Just beautiful, Heidi:-) I really enjoyed this etheree of yours! Blessings, xoxo Heidi Sands February 12, 2022 at 1:23 PM Thank you Edward. I am happy you enjoyed it. Blessings :)

Karen Croft February 12, 2022 at 1:17 PM love this!!! Karen Croft February 12, 2022 at 5:32 PM You're welcome! Heidi Sands February 12, 2022 at 1:22 PM Thank you Karen :)

Robert Gorelick February 12, 2022 at 12:44 PM Soft, mellow, delightful. Thank you for visiting Heidi. Robert Heidi Sands February 12, 2022 at 1:22 PM Thank you Robert :)

Tom Cunningham February 12, 2022 at 10:14 AM A lovely image of warm summer days and the daisies swaying in the warm breeze. Cant come quick enough. Hope your weekend is going well Heidi. Tom Heidi Sands February 12, 2022 at 10:17 AM Thank you Tom. You are right! It can't come quick enough. We have milder temp today, but still a couple feet of snow on the ground and back to the cold tomorrow. I hope you are having a nice weekend. I always appreciate your comments :)

Vijay Pandit February 12, 2022 at 5:29 AM I see them swaying and dancing. Much joy you witnessed in thousand happy faces, Heidi. Apt description brings forth the smiling imagery. Heidi Sands February 12, 2022 at 5:39 AM Thank you Vijay. I am happy to see your kind comment. I hope you have a nice day :)

Sotto Poet February 12, 2022 at 5:26 AM Nicely penned, Heidi, deep and touching poem. I loved the two following lines: Spreading smiles all around to grow I want to be one of them to know Best regards Heidi Sands February 12, 2022 at 5:38 AM Thank you Lasaad. I always appreciate your kind feedback :)