Dance Of Death

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Written, March 27, 2025
For the International Contest, Dance of Death
Sponsor, Robert James Liguori

 
Inspired by the song, Dance Of Death by Iron Maiden Let me tell you a story that will petrify you I will share what happened One night when I was in Paris on vacation I was drinking coffee at a cafe At a table alone in an outside terrace Then, I decided on a walk under the moon With the stars winking at me I was enjoying the solitude Unaware that I was being followed From a distance I was being stalked I ran feeling scared and fell As something cold touched me A handsome man stood blocking my path Oh, there was evil in his eyes Lets go for a drink he suggested to me Reaching out for my hand That is when the dance of the dead began As that hand felt dead Into a circle of fire I was led I seemed to be in a trance Soon, I was encircled by the dead Dancing with the dead Time stopped and I was frozen with fear But, still I danced And the blaze of the fire grew higher I danced on burning coals But felt nothing My soul and spirit was leaving Oh, if only someone could pull me back If only someone had witnessed this I danced, and twirled and sang for them They watched me with dead eyes Lifeless, empty men They had ascended from hell I danced with the dead, laughing howling for them My body felt heavy and cold As I danced in the circle of death A fight started and took the attention from me I fled running faster than the wind I just looked straight ahead running, running Thinking they will come after me, I am doomed I should have said my last goodbyes To my family and my friends Since that night when I am laying in bed I wake from my dreams to dance with the dead Since that night when I am laying in bed I wake from my dreams to dance with the dead To dance with the dead

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Date: 4/3/2025 4:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/6/2025 6:57:00 PM
Kenisha, thank you for the congratulations, blessings ~
Date: 4/2/2025 8:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/6/2025 6:58:00 PM
Thriveni, thank you for the congratulations, blessings ~
Date: 4/2/2025 4:15:00 PM
Gorgeous poem. Filled with emotion.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/6/2025 6:58:00 PM
Robert, thank you for the contest and my great placement, and for the compliment, blessings ~
Date: 3/30/2025 9:39:00 PM
Was it a dream or a hallucination? The story of this nightmare made my hair stand on end. An engrossing tale from start to finish. All the best dear Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/2/2025 8:58:00 AM
Valsa, it was for the contest, and I would say that it was a nightmare, that song Dance of Death was very dark, blessings ~
Date: 3/27/2025 1:41:00 PM
eek such a creepy opening to the poem, it gave me goosebumps Constance! hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 3/29/2025 12:23:00 PM
Jan, very creepy contest, song, and poem, thanks for the goosebumps compliment, hugs and blessings ~
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