Joseph May Poet Rhyme

Dance Moves

 Across the room their eyes did meet
 She heard the song, she felt the beat
 They danced all night to rhythms sweet
 It was a treat, it was a treat

 She saw the passion in his eyes
 Her desire she could not disguise
 They shared kisses and ecstasy's prize
 as heartbeats rise, as heartbeats rise

 Was it love that this dance had spanned
 Was it destiny's winning hand
 Or was it something less than grand
 A one night stand, a one night stand

 1-22-2024
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Brandy Nicole January 25, 2024 at 5:58 PM Since I'm optimistic, I'm saying it's something grand, instead of a one night stand. It's love. A magical moment shared, indeed. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy

Heidi Sands January 24, 2024 at 2:51 PM Great writing Joseph. Surprise, surprise...later not a one night stand:)

Victor Buhagiar January 24, 2024 at 8:45 AM Such a pity that this romance should last just one night. Lovely poem.

Hilda Greenhough January 23, 2024 at 5:38 PM Nice down to earth poem. You wrote it well. A very good read.

Kim Rodrigues January 23, 2024 at 4:51 PM Great work!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2024 at 10:34 AM - Anyway... it was a wonderful evening... a lovely poem, Joseph :) - hugs

Silent One January 23, 2024 at 10:03 AM DAmn... only a one night stand after all that.. nicely done Joseph..

Ink Empress January 23, 2024 at 8:56 AM This has a very lyrical rhythm to it and I absolutely love your word weaving creating such a passionate ambience. I especially love how you’ve questioned in the end. So touching! Loved it . Pleasure reading your work always

Sotto Poet January 23, 2024 at 6:51 AM What an exquisite manifestation of tenderness and love, Joseph! The rhythm of your verse was exquisite.

Vijay Pandit January 23, 2024 at 6:39 AM Charming poetry, Joseph--much enjoyed the rhythm of ending lines in every stanza.

Hiya Sharma January 23, 2024 at 2:18 AM Oh, this is such a passionate and romantic write, describing magic and love within moments of time.. The rhymes are so beautiful here along with mellifluous flow of words. You've crafted this gorgeously!

Karen Jones January 22, 2024 at 9:43 PM This is fun! Made me giggle.