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Dance Moves

Across the room their eyes did meet She heard the song, she felt the beat They danced all night to rhythms sweet It was a treat, it was a treat She saw the passion in his eyes Her desire she could not disguise They shared kisses and ecstasy's prize as heartbeats rise, as heartbeats rise Was it love that this dance had spanned Was it destiny's winning hand Or was it something less than grand A one night stand, a one night stand 1-22-2024 Form: Monotetra

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Date: 1/25/2024 5:58:00 PM
Since I'm optimistic, I'm saying it's something grand, instead of a one night stand. It's love. A magical moment shared, indeed. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 1/24/2024 2:51:00 PM
Great writing Joseph. Surprise, surprise...later not a one night stand:)
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Date: 1/24/2024 8:45:00 AM
Such a pity that this romance should last just one night. Lovely poem.
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Date: 1/23/2024 5:38:00 PM
Nice down to earth poem. You wrote it well. A very good read.
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Date: 1/23/2024 4:51:00 PM
Great work!
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Date: 1/23/2024 10:34:00 AM
- Anyway... it was a wonderful evening... a lovely poem, Joseph :) - hugs
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Date: 1/23/2024 10:03:00 AM
DAmn... only a one night stand after all that.. nicely done Joseph..
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Date: 1/23/2024 8:56:00 AM
This has a very lyrical rhythm to it and I absolutely love your word weaving creating such a passionate ambience. I especially love how you’ve questioned in the end. So touching! Loved it . Pleasure reading your work always
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Date: 1/23/2024 6:51:00 AM
What an exquisite manifestation of tenderness and love, Joseph! The rhythm of your verse was exquisite.
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Date: 1/23/2024 6:50:00 AM
such a delightful creation of passion and romance. I loved the cadence of your poem; reminded me a bit of when hubby & I met...it was more than a one-night stand :-) enjoy your day, Sara
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Date: 1/23/2024 6:39:00 AM
Charming poetry, Joseph--much enjoyed the rhythm of ending lines in every stanza.
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Date: 1/23/2024 2:18:00 AM
Oh, this is such a passionate and romantic write, describing magic and love within moments of time.. The rhymes are so beautiful here along with mellifluous flow of words. You've crafted this gorgeously!
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Date: 1/22/2024 9:43:00 PM
This is fun! Made me giggle.
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