Dance

A peaceful drifting wind touches grace so slight my heart flutters to engage your spirit I watch you dance in silent silhouette untouched and free an elegant motion free and uninhibited These precious beats shared in one captivating moment I take your hand and lead you to a beautiful plateau rhythms sway an orchestrated passion of mystical dreams so slight my heart flutters to engage your spirit

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2011 9:54:00 PM

this one I like the best I think!! Hard to decide among them.

Janette Fisher

Date: 3/7/2011 12:43:00 PM

Many congrats on your three first round successes Rick - luv Janette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 6:48:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/3/2011 6:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Rick. Love, Carol

Constance La France

Date: 1/2/2011 10:24:00 PM

Congratualions on your "featured poem" this week it is~ really lovely~very peaceful and as a dancer myself 'I love the theme of dancing' well done my poetic and forever friend~~

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/2/2011 3:49:00 PM

lovely poem Rick , congrats on having it featured this week

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/2/2011 3:39:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful one to share with us all today my friend with luv..

Carol Fillmore

Date: 9/9/2010 5:33:00 AM

this has beautiful imagery, and can see this dance going on... lovely! Thanks so much for your comment on my recent post...very appreciated:)

Michael Hornschuch

Date: 9/2/2010 2:46:00 PM

elequent as usual mistro!

Susan Mills

Date: 9/2/2010 9:32:00 AM

I like the complexities and intricacies of your poem here. Breathtaking! Love, Susan

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/2/2010 5:07:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Rick. I will not be reading poetry for a few days as I will be gone from Friday until Monday. I wish you a weekend filled with good health, love, and loads of inspiration. Love and Blessings, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/1/2010 6:29:00 PM

How beautiful, Rick! You have such a romantic style in this poem. May I have the next dance? Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/1/2010 4:51:00 PM

lovely, good luck in the contest

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 9/1/2010 12:01:00 PM

very interesting write. i enjoyed reading your poem today. keep up the good work.