Dance

On scarred green corduroy couches, lined with age, sighing under my weight-

Like bearded old men, releasing ages of wearied wisdom, 

Slipping in their sleep-

In rooms wreathed in smoke, wafting between breaths of laughter and exhale

And somehow beautiful, electricity in the music that shallows me out

And haunts.

I see the wooden floor, again, as you lead me, my feet moving to their own beat

Pound, pound, my heart and my shoes, 

Do I know what’s happening?

And the rhythm I have is my own, but you don’t mind.  Two hands grasp mine, warm with 

sweat

Restraining, I have no escape, I breathe but I don’t know how.

Can I meet your eyes?

Two black holes, a vortex, pulling me into the tornado and the storm,

And the calmness in the middle, intense as it sparkles and shimmers in clarity,

Fading out cat-calls and undertones of despair.

Fading me into you, dissolving me through layers of dermis and epidermis 

soaking silently through cotton and fear

A puddle on your now-closed eyelids, wrinkly in determination

 smoothing out in waves of hope.

And then –you’re here, I feel 

Shaky confusion, slippery thrill, wet and winsome glory

Searching, and finding -so I thought-

And sudden twists and turns

Do you know where you’re going?

And then I feel it, the smile, maybe you won’t

It grows inside of me and gives birth, to a tiny laugh

In high falsetto, notes dancing across a page

Barred inside snow-white fields, but exploding with mirthful mischief just the same. 

So am I, and you may imprison me, 

But I sing “in my chains like the sea”.*



*from Dylan Thomas’s “Fern Hill”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 8:06 AM
such passion! Light & Love
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June 4, 2009 at 12:16 PM
beautifully written poem
Rider Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 11:08 AM
Such vivid imagery! This is a wonderful poem! ~Trudy~
Caliri Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 9:39 PM
One of my favorite poems on the site...the reference is ingenious.
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March 14, 2009 at 10:23 PM
WOW! Such language... such vivid expression and detail. I love your Dylan quote and some of your phrasing that calls him to mind... BRAVO Micaela! and thanks for your Soup messages! I am most grateful... Best wishes, Keith
Jordan Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 6:00 PM
Micaela - Congrats on placing in John's contest - God Bless, MJ
Richards Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 7:22 AM
Wow! This was a real winning poem...Well done! ~Congratulations Micaela...you made the scene come alive! ~ Carrie
Winter Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 7:22 AM
YAY Micaela!!! Congratulations on your awesome big win in John's contest! Good for you! Love, Shar
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February 27, 2009 at 6:57 AM
congrats on your win.. spirit and soul, constance
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February 19, 2009 at 10:43 AM
Micaela, vivid images. I especially liked "notes dancing across a page" and "music that shallows me out." Well done! Love, Carolyn
Santiago Avatar
February 18, 2009 at 4:16 AM
i enjoyed reading this piece and i love this..."lined with age, sighing under my weight", more please! thanks for sharing... Ernesto
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