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Daisy Brain

DAISY BRAIN Clever is the chime Beating over head This poem has a rhyme That digs a flower bed Daisy sewn on a pillow brain As a crow flies overhead Merely a peccadillo As she counts the dead 6/26/2017 Light Verse

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/26/2017 1:04:00 PM

- Well done, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2017 1:37:00 PM

Thanks :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 6/26/2017 11:39:00 AM

Such a cool poem, Kim. I agree w/Paul ... it's totally original. It made me smile, chuckle and give a silent shout out to you for bringing more joy to my day. Ty, sista. Excellent poetry. Love always.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2017 11:42:00 AM

Thanks, Freddie! My fine poetry friends push me to be a better poet :)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/26/2017 11:07:00 AM

I love the originality of this poem, Kim, and that includes the title, too. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2017 11:42:00 AM

Thanks, Paul!