Daft- Hallucination

I sat under an oak tree in fall

I must have fell asleep I recall

I awoke on a boat

with a frog in my throat

an elephant making a trunk call.


20/10/2017
Contest surreal and daft
Sponsored by Kevin Shaw.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Allison Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 4:09 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Roy:-) hugs Jan xx
Pett Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 4:23 AM
Thank you very much Jan for your congratulations, really appreciated. :))
Smith Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 12:07 PM
Great fun Roy, much enjoyed :)
Pett Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 12:23 PM
Thanks Gary for your very kind comment, much appreciated. :))
May Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 11:38 AM
A fun write Roy...Congrats on your win
Pett Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 11:58 AM
Thanks Joseph for your congratulations much appreciated. :))
Barden Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 5:20 AM
LOL - got a chuckle - congrats, Roy! :-)
Pett Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 5:36 AM
Thanks Gregory for your congratulations, really pleased that it gave you a smile, thanks again for your support and encouragement. :))
Stebbings Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 3:28 AM
Nice amusing limerick, Roy. Congratulations. // Barry
Pett Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 5:29 AM
Thanks Barry for your congratulations, pleased you liked this, really pleased it got placed. :))
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 9:19 PM
I knew I smelled a winner :) Congratulations! xomo
Pett Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 5:22 AM
Thanks Maureen, your a better judge than me I thought it had no chance, but over the moon with my placement, thanks again your support is really appreciated. :))
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 8:45 PM
Roy, when I read your poem the other day, I remembered a recent dream I had of my cat talking to me as a woman. I have not posted it yet but maybe tomorrow. Thanks for the inspiration.
Pett Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 3:06 AM
I will certainly read this when you post it, this sounds really interesting. :))
Roper Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 9:42 PM
Hahaha, this is so funny, Roy! Luck in the contest hugs Eve
Pett Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 8:18 AM
Thank you very much Eve, so pleased if this made you smile, thanks again for your best wishes. :))))
Dietrich Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 7:20 PM
haha, That is super cool , the trunk call at the end!! You have inspired me. I now want to go through some of my dream journal entries and make a poem based on some of the weirdness in them!
Pett Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Thank you so much Andrea, really pleased you liked this bit of madness, hope this is daft enough for Kevin. :)))
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 9:11 AM
Giggle :) daft for sure! My best to you for the contest! xomo
Pett Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 9:15 AM
Thanks Maureen, hope this is what Kevin's looking for, thanks again for your support. :)))
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 8:54 AM
very humourous limerick Kevin:-) hugs jan xx
Pett Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 9:12 AM
Thanks Jan, I tried to make this as daft as I could, not sure if I've succeeded, thanks again, Roy. :)))
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