Daft- Hallucination

I sat under an oak tree in fall

I must have fell asleep I recall

I awoke on a boat

with a frog in my throat

an elephant making a trunk call.


20/10/2017
Contest surreal and daft
Sponsored by Kevin Shaw.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 11/24/2017 4:09:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Roy:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/24/2017 4:23:00 AM
Thank you very much Jan for your congratulations, really appreciated. :))
Date: 11/18/2017 12:07:00 PM
Great fun Roy, much enjoyed :)
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Roy Pett
Date: 11/18/2017 12:23:00 PM
Thanks Gary for your very kind comment, much appreciated. :))
Date: 11/18/2017 11:38:00 AM
A fun write Roy...Congrats on your win
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Roy Pett
Date: 11/18/2017 11:58:00 AM
Thanks Joseph for your congratulations much appreciated. :))
Date: 11/18/2017 5:20:00 AM
LOL - got a chuckle - congrats, Roy! :-)
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Roy Pett
Date: 11/18/2017 5:36:00 AM
Thanks Gregory for your congratulations, really pleased that it gave you a smile, thanks again for your support and encouragement. :))
Date: 11/18/2017 3:28:00 AM
Nice amusing limerick, Roy. Congratulations. // Barry
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Roy Pett
Date: 11/18/2017 5:29:00 AM
Thanks Barry for your congratulations, pleased you liked this, really pleased it got placed. :))
Date: 11/17/2017 9:19:00 PM
I knew I smelled a winner :) Congratulations! xomo
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Date: 11/18/2017 5:22:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, your a better judge than me I thought it had no chance, but over the moon with my placement, thanks again your support is really appreciated. :))
Date: 10/22/2017 8:45:00 PM
Roy, when I read your poem the other day, I remembered a recent dream I had of my cat talking to me as a woman. I have not posted it yet but maybe tomorrow. Thanks for the inspiration.
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Roy Pett
Date: 10/23/2017 3:06:00 AM
I will certainly read this when you post it, this sounds really interesting. :))
Date: 10/20/2017 9:42:00 PM
Hahaha, this is so funny, Roy! Luck in the contest hugs Eve
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Roy Pett
Date: 10/21/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thank you very much Eve, so pleased if this made you smile, thanks again for your best wishes. :))))
Date: 10/20/2017 7:20:00 PM
haha, That is super cool , the trunk call at the end!! You have inspired me. I now want to go through some of my dream journal entries and make a poem based on some of the weirdness in them!
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Roy Pett
Date: 10/21/2017 8:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea, really pleased you liked this bit of madness, hope this is daft enough for Kevin. :)))
Date: 10/20/2017 9:11:00 AM
Giggle :) daft for sure! My best to you for the contest! xomo
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Roy Pett
Date: 10/20/2017 9:15:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, hope this is what Kevin's looking for, thanks again for your support. :)))
Date: 10/20/2017 8:54:00 AM
very humourous limerick Kevin:-) hugs jan xx
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Roy Pett
Date: 10/20/2017 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I tried to make this as daft as I could, not sure if I've succeeded, thanks again, Roy. :)))
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