Daffodils

I'll admit.
This is going to be
One more poem
About how you
Make me feel-
One more
Metaphor
Of the love I have
For you.
You know, 
If I were still
A child, 
Unaware of
The world's cruelties, 
Perfectly content
In my ignorance, 
You would be
The furthest thing 
From my mind.
I would just
Be walking along
One day, when
I was just
Pouty and
Terribly disgruntled,
Not quite admiring
The scenery,
Just walking.
I would be
Thinking of how
I'd never not 
Be mad again,
Because that seems
To be what
Children do, 
When, 
Suddenly,
I would be
Stopped by the
Sweet, innocent character
Of a single daffodil.
I would look around,
Wondering if
Anyone knew that
This daffodil was here,
But I'd pick it up
Without giving it a 
Second thought,
Because it was so
Conveniently placed
Before me. 
I would gaze
For a while,
Completely forgetting
Whatever it was
That had my
Knickers in a twist.
I would
Be in awe
Of something
So simple,
But also of
Something that
I needed all along.
I would get
In my bright
Little eyes,
A twinkle and a tear,
Then go about 
My days
Happy
Because I was 
So special, 
So lucky
To be given
Such a gift.
But now, 
I know this feeling well.
As I said it would be,
This has been
Just another poem
Of how you make me feel;
Just one more metaphor
Of the love I have for you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 3/9/2011 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Josey. Love Carol
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Date: 11/2/2008 8:57:00 AM
I share your love of daffodils - well written!
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Date: 10/30/2008 7:07:00 PM
Josey -Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless
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Date: 10/28/2008 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations Josey on "Daffodils" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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Date: 10/27/2008 10:03:00 AM
Josey, congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2008 5:07:00 PM
Congratulations Josey on your well deserved featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/26/2008 11:27:00 AM
The short lines work well to convey your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/16/2008 10:11:00 AM
This speaks directly to the reader and clearly, through a keen use of imagery, details the feelings the writer feels. A terrific read. Michael
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