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Daffodils

I'll admit. This is going to be One more poem About how you Make me feel- One more Metaphor Of the love I have For you. You know, If I were still A child, Unaware of The world's cruelties, Perfectly content In my ignorance, You would be The furthest thing From my mind. I would just Be walking along One day, when I was just Pouty and Terribly disgruntled, Not quite admiring The scenery, Just walking. I would be Thinking of how I'd never not Be mad again, Because that seems To be what Children do, When, Suddenly, I would be Stopped by the Sweet, innocent character Of a single daffodil. I would look around, Wondering if Anyone knew that This daffodil was here, But I'd pick it up Without giving it a Second thought, Because it was so Conveniently placed Before me. I would gaze For a while, Completely forgetting Whatever it was That had my Knickers in a twist. I would Be in awe Of something So simple, But also of Something that I needed all along. I would get In my bright Little eyes, A twinkle and a tear, Then go about My days Happy Because I was So special, So lucky To be given Such a gift. But now, I know this feeling well. As I said it would be, This has been Just another poem Of how you make me feel; Just one more metaphor Of the love I have for you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/9/2011 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Josey. Love Carol
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Date: 11/2/2008 8:57:00 AM
I share your love of daffodils - well written!
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Date: 10/30/2008 7:07:00 PM
Josey -Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless
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Date: 10/28/2008 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations Josey on "Daffodils" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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Date: 10/27/2008 10:03:00 AM
Josey, congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2008 5:07:00 PM
Congratulations Josey on your well deserved featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/26/2008 11:27:00 AM
The short lines work well to convey your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/16/2008 10:11:00 AM
This speaks directly to the reader and clearly, through a keen use of imagery, details the feelings the writer feels. A terrific read. Michael
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