Daffodil Daze

She blooms a cheerful yellow, Under the sunshine mellow, Her long, dangling legs swaying, Bobbing her head, displaying A royal elegant charm, She shines brightly in the farm, Spring has arrived, so has she, Her blonde tresses bounce in glee, The breeze is her dancing friend, Together, they bow and bend, Setting the dance stage ablaze, Spring smiles in daffodil daze.
20th February 2023 For Joseph May's "In bloom" contest
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Peck Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 9:03 AM
Beautiful imaging and personification, Jo! Congratulations!
Kauffman Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations on your win Jo! This poem vibrates with the joy of spring as she bobs her head and sways her legs! Delightful personification! So many wonderful, innovative images! Sending you blessings of spring joy!
May Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 4:31 PM
Wonderful write Jo, Congrats on your win
Goldsmith Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 8:39 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your write. When Daffodil flowers show up, you know Spring is in the air. Have a blessed day...............
Poet Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 6:18 PM
A lovely and well-crafted poem, Jo. Back with congratulations on your top-winning placement.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 7:55 AM
Who doesn't love daffodils? Great poem
Nuwas Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:08 PM
I love daffodils, what a beautiful poem.
Kulkarni Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 1:49 PM
How beautifully penned Jo! I could visualize a gorgeous yellow daffodil dancing with a breeze of spring!
DiMino Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 11:55 AM
Love it! A FAVE from me, Jo.
George Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:13 AM
Love this so much Jo !"Her blonde tresses bounce in glee, The breeze is her dancing friend," These lines are especially enchanting !
Poet Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 4:41 AM
Such a superb poem, Jo. Good luck with the contest.
Mcintosh Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 2:41 AM
Oh, awesomeness. I just love this. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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