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Daffodil Daze

She blooms a cheerful yellow, Under the sunshine mellow, Her long, dangling legs swaying, Bobbing her head, displaying A royal elegant charm, She shines brightly in the farm, Spring has arrived, so has she, Her blonde tresses bounce in glee, The breeze is her dancing friend, Together, they bow and bend, Setting the dance stage ablaze, Spring smiles in daffodil daze.
20th February 2023 For Joseph May's "In bloom" contest

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Date: 3/10/2023 9:03:00 AM
Beautiful imaging and personification, Jo! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/8/2023 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jo! This poem vibrates with the joy of spring as she bobs her head and sways her legs! Delightful personification! So many wonderful, innovative images! Sending you blessings of spring joy!
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Date: 3/7/2023 4:31:00 PM
Wonderful write Jo, Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/7/2023 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your write. When Daffodil flowers show up, you know Spring is in the air. Have a blessed day...............
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Date: 3/7/2023 3:34:00 AM
Such a happy vibe! Congratulations on your win
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Date: 3/6/2023 6:18:00 PM
A lovely and well-crafted poem, Jo. Back with congratulations on your top-winning placement.
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Date: 2/22/2023 7:55:00 AM
Who doesn't love daffodils? Great poem
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Date: 2/21/2023 5:08:00 PM
I love daffodils, what a beautiful poem.
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Date: 2/21/2023 1:49:00 PM
How beautifully penned Jo! I could visualize a gorgeous yellow daffodil dancing with a breeze of spring!
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Date: 2/21/2023 11:55:00 AM
Love it! A FAVE from me, Jo.
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Date: 2/21/2023 5:13:00 AM
Love this so much Jo !"Her blonde tresses bounce in glee, The breeze is her dancing friend," These lines are especially enchanting !
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Date: 2/21/2023 4:41:00 AM
Such a superb poem, Jo. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 2/21/2023 2:41:00 AM
Oh, awesomeness. I just love this. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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