Dad's Pine Trees

You carried the young pine trees from our old cottage by the lake
To our new cottage on the hill, planting them carefully, lovingly
When young and bent crooked; you guided them with a little stake
Over the years, with the sun and the rain, they grew 
Into mature, sturdy pines, so strong and so beautiful
They were each free to branch out in any direction
For you planted them wisely, far apart to have room to grow
They shed their needles, sometimes overwhelmingly sad
Their unmistaken fragrance carried on the wings
Of the slightest breeze that wafts gently through the air
How it reminds me of you, and I feel like you are here
Whispering that you love us and have never left us
Then, I shall whisper softly that I will never forget you, Dad
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Gem Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 6:53 PM
Absolutely beautiful and heart warming
Joe Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 2:45 AM
A great use of metaphor in this. I read it as a reference to parenting but I'm sure it would work on other levels. The descriptions are rendered beautifully and have no sickly sentimentalism. My only gripe in this is the use of the word 'cottage' in line one and two. they are too close together for a word that has a hardness to the sound. Otherwise a wonderful poem.
Ehigiator Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 6:00 PM
So beautifully written, You have painted a lovely picture reflecting the warm memories of you and your father, and although he is not physically with you, he is there, watching you, loving you close... Keep those memories alive always..Keep sharing and Welcome to the family Soup, I say that because we are a big family here.. God Bless, Always Tyesha
Higgins Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 9:48 AM
This is a very sweet write of remembrance and love.. the heart never letting go of the window of love...well done and thanks for your comments.
P. Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 3:49 AM
Cynthia, you have written such a heart felt write! your father seems so strong and wise! and yes he is around watching over you! take care! ~ Arany
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