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seven smiles seven
small faces one pizza left~
seven sad faces


Date: 05/31/2019

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Date: 6/1/2019 1:41:00 PM
ha, it reminds me of our "henry's hamburger" nights when I was growing up and my dad only bought 2 burgers and one fry each for all ten of us. I would always trade one of my burgers for a sibling's fry!
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William Kekaula
Date: 6/1/2019 2:13:00 PM
"Oh dad...", my small framed kids, I cannot fathom their vacuum-like mouths, boys munching, girls nibbling--whilst playing sports?, Aloha William
Date: 5/31/2019 5:57:00 AM
ooh poor kids, I feel hungry now reading your poem and seeing the pic:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/31/2019 6:30:00 AM
'Tis true, be they my seven kids after three large pizzas, and their small framed bodies all, after my impromptu act, went to the freezer and took out the Dreyers and seven smiles returned Jan, Aloha William
Date: 5/31/2019 3:06:00 AM
Ah, you wrote a clever senryu. Liked the ending. Good luck.
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Date: 5/31/2019 3:29:00 AM
Yeah, my heart bleeds there, thanks Victor, Aloha William