Daddy

Into the light Daddy... Please give me your trust. Hold my hand tightly Daddy... I wont let you shower with dust. I miss you so much Daddy... How I wish you're walking me down the aisle, Your little girl's a Mom now Daddy.. A boy named after you, I wish you could see his first smile. Walk this path with me Daddy... I promise you the road is much better. And don't worry about me Daddy... You taught me a lot, thank you for being the best father. I know you are safe now Daddy... But it still hurts now that you are gone. I still cry a lot and wishing for your hugs Daddy... I'm sorry for all the pain, I will always love you, My Daddy.

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James Inman

Date: 3/21/2016 12:43:00 PM

Very emotional and touching piece, Sarah.

Lester Lagdamen

Date: 3/27/2012 2:00:00 AM

Malish na habibi ah. :* :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/25/2012 10:48:00 PM

Sarah, a very sweet and sad poem,,, very moving and emotinal....take care and have yourself a good night~LUV*PD

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/24/2012 9:16:00 PM

Dear Sarah, YOUR Words are very Emotive I read below where YOUR DAD is still Alive, that is a Blessing YOUR Reply to Joyce (I call her MOM) I believe YOU can not Write the Emotion of Death of a LOVED ONE, Until YOU truely Feel This is a Great Preamble Thank - YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...HG ( Harry )

Sarah Jabri
Date: 3/25/2012 5:04:00 AM

Thank you Harry..my dad's 60 years old now and very very much healthy, thanks to God :)...

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/24/2012 6:09:00 PM

If your loss is recent you re still going through the shock and loss. If he died a long time ago, you still miss him at very special times like a new daughter. Lovely poem. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce

Sarah Jabri
Date: 3/24/2012 6:19:00 PM

Thank you Joyce :) ... my father is still alive though, I just wrote this one out of my emotions...of how I might feel once he's gone..and still i couldnt put it all into words...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/24/2012 5:05:00 PM

Excellent writing, I enjoyed reading your poem Sarah. Love, Carol

Sarah Jabri
Date: 3/24/2012 6:19:00 PM

thank you very much Carol <3