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To others you were many things To me, you were just dad The only one I wanted The best I could have had You never said “I’m Leaving” You never said “Goodbye” You were gone before I knew it And only God knows why In life I loved you dearly In death I love you still It does not make it easy To know you are not around The only bit of comfort Is to know you are Heaven bound

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/27/2016 1:40:00 PM
READING THIS A SECOND TIME
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Date: 8/27/2014 7:39:00 PM
SYLVIA, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/20/2014 8:27:00 AM
Sylvia,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/20/2014 6:42:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Sylvia - I choose your first very well written and touching poem - I like it - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/19/2014 4:43:00 PM
aww sweetie-Hugs-So touching, well said. Welcome to poetry soup Sylvia, hope to read more of your writing soon
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Date: 8/19/2014 9:02:00 AM
Such a heartfelt write - I am so so sorry for your loss- my heart goes out to you - I know my dad is dying - it doesn't make it any easier to live with but at least we have time togethr now which I cherish:-( Hugs Hugs jan xx
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