Dad

I dreamed you alive last night
a revisit of our Sunday drives
to Ladner seeking blackberries
I came running back to the car
my ice cream bucket filled 
with blackberries, my wrist
full of red cuts. Blackberry juice
some still trickling from my mouth,
I grinned at you.

I dreamed you back to the river
where you took me fishing
a black slimy bullhead
my first trophy fish
I was proud 
you looked at me with disapproval 
as I poked my fish with a knife
till its guts oozed out.

I dreamed you back to the pear orchard
the biggest pears where at the top
of rotting tree limbs. You shouted
a warning at me to be careful
I was eager to please you and ventured
far out on fragile limbs 
Septembers crisp chill reddening my face
but it was your branch that snapped
and you crashed heavily to the ground.
You broke your heel.

I dreamed you back to Fraser Street
you on your nightly walk
I drunk out of my mind
swearing at two girls passing by  
and I saw your face, that look
and I tried to walk straight
tried to apologize, 
tried to make things right
but you quickened your pace
as if I was a stranger.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/29/2009 12:43:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words as a powerful reminder that there are consequences to our actions. People can only take so much hurt. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 2:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals darrell. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2009 7:49:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 8/28/2009 4:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 8/24/2009 1:10:00 PM
Congratualtions on being featured this week! Wonderful poem! ~Trudy~
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Date: 8/24/2009 4:00:00 AM
congratulations on your featured poem God bless you from diane
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Date: 8/24/2009 3:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Darrell. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2009 7:02:00 PM
The first verse " I dreamed you alive last night" Hit just reeled me in... I always dream he's alive but than I wake up and I realize he's gone and the pain comes crashing back
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Date: 3/22/2009 7:17:00 AM
Well once I started reading I could not stop. Memories captured so vividly with your excellent writing and imagery. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/22/2009 6:17:00 AM
One of my favorite themes now rarified in new literature. This was a deft handling of the subject, it brings out your mastery and shows your genius. Welcome to the soup. Love
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