Cyo Hayride Picnic

Note:  The CYO is the Catholic Youth Organization for teens.  Really enjoyed all the 
activities they held, especially the hayride picnic!
 
 
 
The teenage girls brought baskets filled with food
While the boys braced for a romantic mood
     I packed turkey and some rolls
     But my basket, it had holes
Brushed off my mate’s gestures, not to be rude
 
The full harvest moon shone brightly above
And other couples were pursuing love
     Pete and I dated for years
     I, a virgin, filled with fears
Erotic moments he felt deprived of
 
So as I fumbled through my worn basket
Pete saw me as virginity’s mascot
     The turkey, it was still there
     Rolls had fallen out, but where?
I dove into the hay, the rolls to get
 
Peter dove too and the carriage did sway
Though I wasn’t ready for his “squeeze play”
     I sought only food’s treasure
     This picnic proved a pleasure
That’s how I got my first roll in the hay
 
 
Entry for Carol Brown’s “Picnic Time” Contest.  Some truth to this, but Peter was still 
feeling "deprived" after the hayride.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/22/2011 11:11:00 AM
Ah ! good times at the picnic....good poem ..... ..i laughed at the roll in the hay....well done Carolyn...congratulations
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Date: 5/20/2011 10:54:00 PM
yes, i knew this one would sure make the list. Congratulations, Carolyn.
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Date: 5/19/2011 3:55:00 PM
Carolyn I though i'd find you in the clouds, and sure enough you are, great win great verse great poet yes, but thats just who you are, lamb chops a sizzling on the wire, come n have a drink, with alcaohol a getting high, perchance a dance methinks. love Don
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Date: 5/19/2011 2:31:00 PM
Oh now this was so funny Carolyn and a well deserved 2nd.place win.Take care of yourself.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
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Date: 5/19/2011 8:18:00 AM
A delightful piece...this hayride reads.Congratulations Carolyn on your big win.love, gautami
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:42:00 PM
Carolyn, so great to see you at the top of the list with this classic. Congratulations on your poem's honored second place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/18/2011 10:56:00 AM
Congrats Carolyn on your super win in the contest.Visit me.....Pl.
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Date: 5/18/2011 10:00:00 AM
OMG so funny!!! What a good gal you are great romp her Carolyn and treasure to remember! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/18/2011 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on this fun but very different picnic poem. And your win. Reminds me of a church youth meeting of long ago when a boy who liked me more than I liked him tried to keep his arm around me all the day, much to my embarassment and I didn't know how to tell him to go away. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/18/2011 8:02:00 AM
And poor old Pete's probably still waiting LOL. Many congrats on your win, Carolyn : )
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:51:00 AM
so life -giving, carols; very differnt kind of joy here.. loads of congrats for the big win! :) huggs
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:42:00 AM
This is a total hoot! How did I miss it? Another personal life experience turned into an amazing win! So,.....when did you say your next poetry book is being released? HIgh five, Carolyn! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:42:00 AM
What a fun poem....!! This made me remember my teen days going on a hayride one time with the MYU (Methodist youth group)....ahh...yes...a little romance came along for the ride!!) Gotta watch those naughty teenagers!!
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:38:00 AM
Congrats on your win Carolyn. Funny!
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:56:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Carolyn. Kudos. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:55:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:47:00 AM
nicley written.. congrats on your win .. I am a girl scout leader to 12 brownies and 2 daisies, we went on a hay ride at the end of it they got to play in a huge pile of hay, playing in hay is so much fun..cory
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:18:00 AM
clever and delightful...thank you
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Date: 5/18/2011 4:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2011 2:24:00 PM
Priceless Carolyn, I love it. Good luck in Carol's contest with this funny Limerick, she'll have a good chuckle at it. ( And yes, no more blogs from this Highlander, they are a total pain in the ARSE ) ......:)
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Date: 5/16/2011 3:11:00 PM
How could he feel ''deprived''when in your charming company Carolyn? a great memory to read today!
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Date: 5/15/2011 4:54:00 PM
Fun entry, Carolyn! I know Carol will love this!
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Date: 5/13/2011 11:06:00 AM
Smile, I hear eating turkey, makes one sleepy Carolyn, was that the idea? Best of luck in Carol's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/12/2011 8:31:00 PM
hahaha. I enjoyed this virginal romp in the hay, Carolyn. VEry interesting way to do the contest. I recall the hayrides in our church group as well. I had really looked forward to one in particular and it fell completely thru. THAT DANG GUY.
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Date: 5/12/2011 5:56:00 PM
Lovely perspective to write about the picnic time, Carolyn
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