Cyclone Chaser

Hello Empress. Your words are brief short yet powerful and clear and the imagery of the moment in time and scene come through very clearly that we are in the scene looking on. Its amazing how few words can say so much and tell a vivid story. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. Have a wonderful afternoon and weekend. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)

Wonderfully done. God bless you friend. Love, Gina

Your talent and skill shines in this short form Inky. Your first line is - no, your second line is - no, the two lines are fantastically constructed. :)

I enjoyed the images of this beautifully imagined poem very much! Superb! :)

Witches weaving in an out through the night stars. Very good. Enjoyed reading my friend. Stay safe have a nice weekend.

Very original couplet. Blessings.

True imagery, it paints a picture with poetic words. Well done, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Hmmm.... you did this form very well. :)

cyclone chaser-neon tracer; stars dying-witches flying--- like the word arrangements and the rhymes. They convey and adorn the images intended. Skillfully delivered, Ink.

Wow! Wow! I better go get a Long Island Ice Tea and read this again…maybe i can daydream myself into joining this complete character so fun described in two lines! Fantasy magic! Love it, Empress!

great imagery, cyclons are inhabited, i guess reading your beautiful poem, enjoyed a lot my reading, thanks poet

Dear Ink, your poem is amazingly beautiful Alexandrine poetry. The flashy image of a tornado hunter equipped with neon beams to represent the destruction of the heavens is quite fascinating. The way you've put these verses together is quite unsettling and mysterious. Your rhyming is powerful and moving. Having ruthless fairies flying above contributes to the beautiful setting, making it seem more like Halloween.

Oh my goodness, this is one phenomenal alexandrine poem! I'm really loving this extravagant scene of a cyclone chaser who's cloaked in neon lasers, reflecting the demise of stars..Quite a haunting and spooky scene you've created with your exquisite word-combinations dear! I'm absolutely loving your rhymes as well with 'chaser","laser" Sooo profound. "Heartless witches flying" Now, that's an incredible atmosphere there, I can seriously imagine all of this happening in real, perfect Halloween vibe