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Cyclone Chaser

He's a cyclone chaser, cloaked in neon tracer that mirrors stars dying, heartless witches flying

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 11/9/2023 10:03:00 AM

Hello Empress. Your words are brief short yet powerful and clear and the imagery of the moment in time and scene come through very clearly that we are in the scene looking on. Its amazing how few words can say so much and tell a vivid story. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. Have a wonderful afternoon and weekend. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/6/2023 5:48:00 AM

Wonderfully done. God bless you friend. Love, Gina

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/5/2023 6:09:00 PM

Your talent and skill shines in this short form Inky. Your first line is - no, your second line is - no, the two lines are fantastically constructed. :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/4/2023 5:42:00 PM

I enjoyed the images of this beautifully imagined poem very much! Superb! :)

Eve Roper

Date: 11/4/2023 9:42:00 AM

Witches weaving in an out through the night stars. Very good. Enjoyed reading my friend. Stay safe have a nice weekend.

Ink Empress
Date: 11/4/2023 9:50:00 AM

Thank you so very much always for your kind and generous support, truly grateful

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/4/2023 12:18:00 AM

Very original couplet. Blessings.

Ink Empress
Date: 11/4/2023 8:33:00 AM

Thank you so much Victor always

Bill Baker

Date: 11/3/2023 4:29:00 PM

True imagery, it paints a picture with poetic words. Well done, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Ink Empress
Date: 11/4/2023 8:34:00 AM

Hah yes its a bit too deep. Thank you so much bill for your generous support always so grateful for your uplifting comments

Paige Hind

Date: 11/3/2023 4:17:00 PM

Hmmm.... you did this form very well. :)

Ink Empress
Date: 11/4/2023 8:34:00 AM

You are too kind thank you so much

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/3/2023 2:56:00 PM

dear Ink--this is a poem filled with a bit of subtle mystery. The heartless witches flying was perfect...reminding me of the bad witch in the Wizard of Oz (probably wasn't your intention) The first line grabbed me--quite a unique imagine. Well done, Ink, well done. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Ink Empress
Date: 11/4/2023 8:35:00 AM

Ah yes was for halloween theme hah. Thank you so much dear beautiful sara for always being so supportive and kind truly grateful

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/3/2023 5:50:00 AM

cyclone chaser-neon tracer; stars dying-witches flying--- like the word arrangements and the rhymes. They convey and adorn the images intended. Skillfully delivered, Ink.

Ink Empress
Date: 11/4/2023 8:35:00 AM

Ah thank you so very much vijay im forever grateful always

Sally Eslinger

Date: 11/2/2023 10:42:00 PM

Wow! Wow! I better go get a Long Island Ice Tea and read this again…maybe i can daydream myself into joining this complete character so fun described in two lines! Fantasy magic! Love it, Empress!

Ink Empress
Date: 11/4/2023 8:36:00 AM

Dear sally so good to see you and hear from you i appreciate your kind and generous thoughts truly

Mat Ignacio

Date: 11/2/2023 7:53:00 PM

nicely conveyed the subtle intrigue

Ink Empress
Date: 11/4/2023 8:36:00 AM

Thank you so very much mat i appreciate always your support truly

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/2/2023 4:39:00 PM

great imagery, cyclons are inhabited, i guess reading your beautiful poem, enjoyed a lot my reading, thanks poet

Ink Empress
Date: 11/4/2023 8:37:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind and generous support

Ghairo Daniels

Date: 11/2/2023 10:24:00 AM

Agreed ! He tries to be the Sun, but is none ! ThkU for your comments sweetie. Ink Empress suits your writing. However I wish I knew your real name given by the Angels of writing, I trust. ??

Ink Empress
Date: 11/4/2023 8:37:00 AM

Awwn you are too kind thank you so very much. Always for your generous feedback

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/2/2023 10:00:00 AM

Dear Ink, your poem is amazingly beautiful Alexandrine poetry. The flashy image of a tornado hunter equipped with neon beams to represent the destruction of the heavens is quite fascinating. The way you've put these verses together is quite unsettling and mysterious. Your rhyming is powerful and moving. Having ruthless fairies flying above contributes to the beautiful setting, making it seem more like Halloween.

Ink Empress
Date: 11/4/2023 8:37:00 AM

You really understood my poem for that im grateful thank u so much truly always

Ghairo Daniels
Date: 11/2/2023 10:25:00 AM

Hiya Sharma

Date: 11/2/2023 9:10:00 AM

Oh my goodness, this is one phenomenal alexandrine poem! I'm really loving this extravagant scene of a cyclone chaser who's cloaked in neon lasers, reflecting the demise of stars..Quite a haunting and spooky scene you've created with your exquisite word-combinations dear! I'm absolutely loving your rhymes as well with 'chaser","laser" Sooo profound. "Heartless witches flying" Now, that's an incredible atmosphere there, I can seriously imagine all of this happening in real, perfect Halloween vibe

Ink Empress
Date: 11/2/2023 9:46:00 AM

Lolol i am havn a bad migraine attack and my brain wouldnt stop workin so wrote an alexandrine but not sure if this is better than d first one lolol crazy me thank u sweet angel